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alimoseby May 3 2012, 09:33:28 UTC
Wow. So glad my internet started working again so I could read this. Though I would have gone down and sat in the McDonalds parking lot and used their wifi. =P It's only 10 blocks away and open 24 hours so there would have been a late meal too.

Anyhow, this was absolutely fabulous. I've always thought that when the Doctor in any incarnation got super angry he could be damn near terrifying, and you illustrated that very well.

And I just love how all this happened in front of the other companions as well. I don't know why, but it just seems so fitting. Kind of like a trial in front of Rose's peers.

Loved it. =)

~Ali♥

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tkel_paris May 3 2012, 13:37:05 UTC
Wow! I assume there was something else you needed to do? Or are you keeping that much of an alert out for my work?

It was meant to be very scary, so I'm glad it come across that way. Originally that didn't happen, but talking about the other things Rose did led to the possibility and then it HAD to happen. But poor him now. :(

Ah, but how aware is she of it? :) Anyway, thank you! :D

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alimoseby May 4 2012, 08:38:35 UTC
I actually had been trying to make a payment on my student loan when my internet died. Perhaps CenturyLink decided that Federal Direct Loans didn't need my money this month. =P Also...I was hungry... >_>

~Ali♥

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bas_math_girl May 3 2012, 21:51:36 UTC
I felt that the part with Jack was really poignant in this. And I'm so glad he gave Donna that hug here. :D

Terrific chapter!!

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tkel_paris May 4 2012, 02:28:08 UTC
I knew my instincts were right! :D

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well_widget May 4 2012, 01:11:06 UTC
This chapter was brilliant! It was exactly what I needed to read, and I didn't even know it.

Especially the last line.

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tkel_paris May 4 2012, 02:22:58 UTC
Thank you. I was debating about adding, but I decided the last line would be the last line after all. Good to know I made the right call.

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