Assumptions Burst (1/13) - a Much Ado About Nothing fanfic

[tkel_paris]

Title: Assumptions Burst
Genre: MAAN
Rating: T
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: The lives of Beatrice and Benedick are made more complicated by the presence of her father, who has plans for his only child. Plans she does not agree with.
Disclaimer: Don't own anything Shakespearean. Also don't have anything to do with the Josie Roarke production that I adore so

Comments

[inward_audacity]

Aww. This is a little sad. Benedick is in love with Beatrice yet he has to stay away from her because of her father...and she thinks he was just messing with her heart.

I hope this pair of star-crossed lovers will have a happy ending.

I have great expectations for Pietro. He seems like a sensible and loyal friend. Hopefully, he'll be able to help Benedick talk to Beatrice in private and clear their misunderstandings. Beatrice needs to know that Benedick was and is true to her.

[tkel_paris]

This was where the idea led me to. So it will be sad in places.

I love Pietro, and I hope all my readers will love him, too. :)

[sykira]

Eeek! Okayyyy I am officially in AWE. HOW in the WORLD are you able to write like this?!! I thought I was doing well churning out Shakespearen-lite prose when I was freshly immersed in it, but that was YEARS ago and yet here you are, not just with the Thees and Thous, but also the cadence and ways of speaking so metaphorically even just in casual banter--it's sublime. And amazing. TELL ME YOUR SECRETS WOMAN!

[tkel_paris]

*blushing*

Please. Some of this is my beta tweaking my words. Although I have managed to write some things that Moley didn't tweak at all. I believe one of them is two chapters from this one. But I'm honored that you like it that much. Makes all the hard work worth it.

If I figure it out, I'll tell you. But I still feel like I don't have a firm grasp on when to use "thee" vs "thou" and such.

And I'm insanely curious to know what you think so far of my OC, Pietro.