White Collar - "A Distinct Presence Of Blame"

Mar 24, 2011 23:37

Title: A Distinct Presence Of Blame
Author: TeeJay
Summary: Memories resurface as Neal lays eyes on the scar on Mozzie's chest.
Written for: anonymous for the collarcorner Prompt Fest #4
Prompt/Request: Mozzie's Scars
Would Like: Neal sees the scar on Mozzie's chest left behind from Julian Larssen's bullet. Our charming con man feels like it is his fault. H/C ( Read more... )

so. yeah. i write fan fiction., tv: white collar, fic: white collar

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micheleeeex March 24 2011, 23:19:50 UTC
I love this!

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tj_teejay March 24 2011, 23:34:06 UTC
Thanks. Glad you do. :o)

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damietta March 24 2011, 23:49:17 UTC
Very in character and I absolutely loved the last bit with the drawer.

Moz is very wise in his own bat-shit crazy way.

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tj_teejay April 8 2011, 06:14:36 UTC
Yep, Mozzie is pretty awesome. Such a fun character to write! Thanks for your comment.

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kriadydragon March 25 2011, 02:08:08 UTC
That was excellent. Well balanced with just the right amount of angst and touch of humor. Loved the resolve, that it was neither too fast nor drawn out, requiring only what needed to be said. Well done.

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tj_teejay April 8 2011, 06:13:40 UTC
Thanks. I never really intended to write this story, but when I looked at the prompt, it just tumbled out. Sometimes it can be rewarding when that happens.

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china_shop April 3 2011, 04:30:13 UTC
Aww, I love this! These two are so adorable together, and yes, those closing lines are perfect. *hearts*

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tj_teejay April 8 2011, 06:14:05 UTC
Aw, thanks. :o)

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here via china_shop secretsolitaire July 10 2012, 12:41:41 UTC
This is a lovely scene. *squishes them*

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