White Collar - "Flatline" (1/2)

[tj_teejay]

Title: Flatline (1/2)
Author: TeeJay
Genre: Gen
Characters/Pairings: Neal, Peter, Elizabeth, June
Written for: rabidchild67 for the collarcorner ficswap
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Spoilers for season 3, up to and very much including 3x10 'Countdown', PG-13 rated off-screen sex scene of a canon pairing
Summary: Elizabeth's kidnapping and its aftermath have caused a rift between Neal

Comments

[rabidchild]

What to say? My God - what a lovely gift you've delivered unto me. I can't wait to get to the next part, of course but thought I ought to comment. This...

I LOVE that you continued "Unexpected and Terrifying," which is one of my favorites of yours. This is so damn real, and heart-rending. You convey Peter's anguish and guilt so perfectly. And poor El - she doesn't quite know what to do with herself. And June - such a little conversation at the end there, but as usual, her perceptvieness cuts right to the heart of the matter.

I'ma go read Part 2 now - I don't know what to expect, and I don't know what I want. I do know I'm along for the ride here, whether you deliver a happy ending or not. I'm so bought-in - I can't wait!

[areth_lovejoy]

Great story - Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it:)

[govgal]

Wow! great story! nice emotions.