[fanfic] Legacies: Part 2 (PG-13)

[tiptoe39]

Title: Legacies
Chapter: 2
Author: tiptoe39
Characters/Pairings: Matt/Mohinder; Maya; Elle
Rating: The fic as a whole is rated R; this chapter is rated PG-13 for language.
Warnings: Spoilers for all of Season 2 so far; slash. (The slash is integral to the plot, but it is not the plot itself.)
Summary: We are given legacies by those who leave us, but also

Comments

[shara50]

Excellent addition to the series, looking forward to more!!

[tiptoe39]

thank you dear!

[ilsaluvsrick]

Loved.

The whole 'death of denial' part was so achy good. Poor Mohinder is standing on that precipice and the boy's terrified.

[tiptoe39]

wouldn't you be? :-)

:hugs you:

[boymommytotwo]

:pounds fist on desk:

drama. ugh. i am so, so impatient. everytime you end, my mouth is dangling open for more like a flippin dog.

okay. :done ranting:

one of the numerous wonderful things about your writing is that you build this -thing- with color and substance and intrigue... frame it up, and viola! it's art without you *calling* it art... does that make sense?

brava... please continue!!!

[tiptoe39]

art? moi? nah! tis merely ramblings of a fevered imagination...

but if you want to call it art i'll take it, ya know? :grin:

[kleenexcow]

You've posted some of this before, yeah? It's very familiar to me.

Ohhhhhhh, awkward, thinking-of-Molly Matt and Mohinder. I absolutely adore the fact that they love her so much. But they like each other, too! The dilemma!

And Mohinder's "I pledge to devote myself to science" made me giggle out loud.

I'd probably have a stronger dislike of Mohinder's blonde devil and dark angel if not for the fact that I'd be hanging all over him, too, if given the chance.

Good work! I'm waiting for pt. 3! :D

[tiptoe39]

yes, I posted it as a wip called tentatively, and then it grew a plot.

[crystal_mk]

Oh, oh, oh, I wanna know what happens!!

Maya is sooo trying to hook up with Mohinder!

I can't wait to read the next part!

[boymommytotwo]

yes! agreed. Maya has set her sights/need for attachment on Mohinder. AND i love Matt here - the non-trusting-dont-you-dare-come-too-close protector and defender.

[tiptoe39]

yes, precisely, that "need for attachment" is what kills her each time... she is so used to having a Partner that she's trying to fill the void left by alejandro and then by sylar...

what's sad is that she could potentially end up a real manipulator... and mohinder's just no good at detecting that type... as we've seen :glares at sylar angrily, stay away from him:

[crystal_mk]

She would make an awesomely evil villian if she decided to use her "innocence" against people. They just wouldn't see it coming!

Volumn 3....