Comments | tiptoe39: [fanfic] Dance (Heroes, ensemble; R)

tiptoe39

[fanfic] Dance (Heroes, ensemble; R)

Oct 31, 2009 18:10

Title: Dance
Author: tiptoe39
Rating: R
Pairings: Too many to name.
Summary: Halloween at the Carnival.
Author's note: My last fanfic until after Nanowrimo ends. Enjoy. Thank you to senor_coconut_1 for the beta.

( On All Hallows Eve the ghosts return, and so it is with the carnival that lies just outside of time. )

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Comments 11

eternal_moonie October 31 2009, 23:50:22 UTC

LOVED it!!!!!

tiptoe39 November 1 2009, 02:03:34 UTC

Thank you sweetie!

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tiptoe39 November 1 2009, 13:37:33 UTC

YAY! so glad you liked it. <3 Thank you for the wonderful feedback!

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tiptoe39 November 1 2009, 18:57:34 UTC

Thank you and I'm sorry it wasn't dirtier!! Maybe in December when Nanowrimo is over.... :3

aunt_zelda November 2 2009, 22:29:56 UTC

*jawdrop* WOW ...
This was FANTASTIC. (I'm so glad I inspired this in a roundabout way, I really needed this fic today ...)

They remember last year, at the height of the revelry, Samuel and Joseph feasting on her like twin beasts. She was not the only one. And she won’t be the only one tonight.
*gulps* Oh my ...

Hiro feels healthy and reinvigorated. He holds Charlie’s hand and leads her into the dance. They’ll face death together tomorrow. Tonight, they live.
*cries* That's such a lovely little bit ...

The clock ticks closer to midnight, and spurred by the sound, Nathan twirls Lydia faster. She spins and laughs, and when Edgar’s hands meet Nathan’s on her hips, it’s only more exciting, more feverish. Her lips sear them both with fire, and the veils begin to fall away.
Mmmmmm ...

Peter vaguely recalls feeling this way once before, intrigued and frightened. He remembers another man who came out of nowhere and changed his life. Now Samuel is running a hand over his chest beneath his shirt, and another hand beneath his belt, and ( ... )

tiptoe39 November 2 2009, 23:52:39 UTC

Yay!! I <3 line posts. And I <3 you for reading. Thanks so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed.

::puts police tape around TARDIS - SAMUEL-PROOF POLICE TAPE!!::

"The carnies have the phone box!" *snerk*

aunt_zelda November 2 2009, 23:57:15 UTC

I love you for writing this fic! *hugs you*

::puts police tape around TARDIS - SAMUEL-PROOF POLICE TAPE!!::
*helps you*

"The carnies have the phone box!" *snerk*
That so needs to be macro'd ...

jaune_chat November 6 2009, 10:48:38 UTC

I love this! I adore the dreamy quality of the whole thing, the way the characters drift in and out of focus, how they are willing to accept the strangeness of Halloween night for their own. Hiro and Charlie's love, Nathan, Edgar, and Lydia dancing together, Jeremy alive and happy, all of it so very lovely!

tiptoe39 November 8 2009, 22:14:02 UTC

Thank you sweetie! I really appreciate your taking the time to read it!