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chaeii October 31 2011, 14:37:40 UTC
So uhm, I really like the flow of the fic, and it really does work well. I love the progression of Woohyun and Sunggyu's relationship, how it flows so naturally despite the short-ish time line. I love the notion of falling in love quickly because it's so idk sighh!!!

I love the characters as usual kekeke. You always have a way with those ^^. Sungjong ♥♥♥ what a fabulous human being and you just made him even more fabulous. Dongwoo and the medicine HAHAHA poor adorable kid ;~:. I love all of them okay!!!

And omg you know how much I love the storyline, the whole bad boy good boy falls in love and lives happily ever after thing ;~; It's so ♥♥♥ This an amazing piece of fluff and you are so fucking brilliant.

Your descriptions are so gorgeous btw ;~;

He’s glad Woohyun’s heads (hands) - are around his back, because his tongues (limbs) have completely surrendered. Sunggyu’s head is swimming and he thinks Woohyun knows because the boy sort of laughs, puffs of hot air on his lips and Sunggyu thinks two weeks is all it takes.

Two weeks, to have his heart oscillate somewhere between maybe and definitely.
AMAZING YOU ARE AMAZING!!! <3333

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heehe November 1 2011, 15:48:31 UTC
DON'T YOU LOVE THE LACK OF LITERARY DEPTH IN THIS FIC. ;~;

hehehhe i'm glad the flow is ~natural~
because i am so bad at short fics, i had been quite insecure about the fic's progression. :\ hehehehehehe i'm glad you liked the characterisations (can i just say that it is a by-product of my manga reading...OTL). ;~~~~; WAYLT!!!!!!! YOU ARE MORE BRILLIANT. where is your project cough cough. ^^

;~; ♥♥♥

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