THE AKAME MASS COMMENT FICCY THING
Prompt. Write. Stalk. Pimp.
HAVE AT IT.
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"You never tell me anything now," Hayato says. He raises his right hand, and brushes the cut on Ryu's cheek. Ryu draws back, partly because of the pain, partly because of something else. He can't look at Hayato properly in the eye. He feels like Hayato's searching for something that he shouldn't see. "What are you trying to hide?"
"I -" Ryu begins, but Hayato cuts in, leans down for a kiss (warm chapped lips against his own). Ryu can taste copper in his tongue, Hayato's, he thinks. He wants to say, we shouldn't do this, we can't do this, we can't, we can't, because we're enemies, but he feels his arms snaking up and wrapping around Hayato's neck.
He can feel the rough wall scraping his back, opens the cuts and scratches, and shit this is going to take hours to fix.
They break for a while, catch their breath, and Hayato mutters something before gripping his neck, then lowers his head.
"You look broken."
Ryu feels his heart stutter, and wonders if it's not just skin and bones that Hayato's talking about, but Hayato's trailing kisses down his neck, his collar, feels his hand under his shirt, teasing, squeezing, the other unbuckling his belt, and Ryu's too far gone to think that this is Yabuki Hayato, (former) bestfriend that he's kissing.
Ryu's sinking into Hayato's warmth, Hayato's fist wrapped around him (up, down) and all he can think about is yes, yes, that's it, faster.
"Yabuki," Ryu moans, "Yabuki."
"Hayato," Hayato growls against Ryu's open mouth. "Call me Hayato," and he lifts Ryu up, and pushes inside.
Ryu has never felt this kind of pain before. The pain his body feels from fights somewhat pales in comparison, and Hayato's next words ring in his ears.
"I want to hurt you. I want to hurt you so bad," Hayato groans on the crook of Ryu's neck, and he hears Ryu gasp, and stills. Ryu tries to be manly, and not show any hint of pain, but he supposes it's not exactly the right moment to show how much he's a man.
"Breathe, Ryu," but even Hayato's breathing is uneven, shaky, hands trembling on Ryu's hips. "Breathe." And Ryu thinks that maybe, just maybe, Hayato's forgiven him.
The only source of light is the small street lamp above them, and Ryu can see their shadows dancing on the asphalt floor. The movements look erratic, almost graceful in their own way.
Ryu grows languid against Hayato's chest, wraps his legs around Hayato's waist, meets his thrusts and arches his back.
"Why did you betray me?" Hayato whispers in his ear, bites on Ryu's exposed neck, withdraws outside, then presses forward.
Ryu opens his mouth, tries to say something, but Hayato's thrusting faster, and faster, fist stroking Ryu, and all he can do is scratch Hayato's back, and gasp, "Hayato, I-," before Hayato pushes him to the brink.
The air is thick with sweat, and moans, and there's a whole sentence on Ryu's face that Hayato can't read. "I don't get you at all, Odagiri," Hayato sobs, and comes.
No, you don't, Ryu thinks, but doesn't say as he feels the world collapse around him.
Ryu wakes up early next morning in the bench inside their garden.
One month later he meets Yankumi, and she saves him from completely throwing away his life. She reminds Ryu of someone precious, but it's not like he'll ever admit that to anyone.
The next day, Ryu goes back to Kurogin for two reasons.
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My debut smut fic. Oh gad. I was actually contemplating on whether to post this or not, but I ended up with, oh well *posts*. (And no Sarah, you can't laugh at how pre-mature and unsexy this sounded because it's my debut sgasdgdfghs lol.)
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Matchie, this Akame mass comment ficcy thing is pure genius. You'll always have my heart for this. ♥
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Gokusen2 was a boring jdrama but the Hayato/Ryu moments got me hooked. The confrontations between them always seem to have some underlying meaning. XD
I just realized that Hayato did all the talking and Ryu only said a few words. Oh well, we're used to Ryu not talking that much anyway. LOL.
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*flails madly*
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This Akame fic comment post is getting craaaazy. <3
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Gah. Their angst and their obvious love for each other even when they are trying not to be friends and ajhfgdg. This meme has killed any ability I had to be coherent, but know that I am so in love with this ficlet that I want to steal it and keep it all to myself. ♥
Your porn was great. <33333
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(I don't even dare to check out the post itself because looking at the threads is making me dizzy.)
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THIS IS SO TENDER!
and then
"Hayato," Hayato growls against Ryu's open mouth.
OMG O_______O and then as if that's nto enough
"I want to hurt you. I want to hurt you so bad," Hayato groans on the crook of Ryu's neck, and he hears Ryu gasp
O______O kill me. and when hayato whispers into ryu's ear, it just made me shiver all over. *___*
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There should be more Hayato/Ryu fics in this fandom. :P
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