Your Eyes Look Like Coming Home

[marchleaf]

Title: Your Eyes Look Like Coming Home
Rating: pg-13
Length: 8.8k
Side pairings: Chen/Liyin, Sehun/OC, blink-and-you’ll-miss-it Lay/Luhan
Notes: First of all, shout out to the mod for being so kind and patient with me throughout this entire process; you’re the real MVP. Secondly, thank you to M, C, and N for literally holding my hand and cheering

Comments

[canadaphile]

I don't think even Jongin's smile is as sweet as this fic. Good gravy. I'm so in love with everything.

I love the stories of coming home to a kid having grown up nicely, like, "God damn, what have they been feeding you?!"

Sehun awkwardly trying to get into Minseok's good graces. |D Too little, too late, you brat. Baekhyun as the Korean Lu Han. Kind of an Yixing-Jongin character parallel. I really really liked how you wrote Minseok. Struggling with his feelings and really just getting in his own way. It was frustrating. So obvious Jongin had a thing for him. More than a hyung-crush. It made the ending that much more satisfying (but the bathroom, really? Better than a dressing room, I suppose, but c'mon.).

A+ work. I really enjoyed it. ;w;

=^..^=~

[subduedblue]

sometimes i see jongin's predebut pictures and i just stare at them.
like how did that little kid turn into the grown, confident, and beautiful dancer we see on stage???

this fic is so cuuuuuute. minseok's inner turmoil at liking jongin
and jongin revering minseok as the greatest thing ever.
i wonder what happens after the fic, does minseok go back to beijing
after the summer and do they still stay together? i'm so curious.

[zaraaki]

Xiukai!!!!!!! Love love love!!!! 😍😍😍

[anonymous]

ohhhh xiukai.
i love how cute jongin in this.

[anonymous]

This is just one of the best xiukai fics I've ever read...and I've read like almost all of it. i'm surprised that I was easily moved by xiumin's emotions in this fic that I nearly cried over something not really that sad haha anyways thanks for the great read!