Riptide Fic - Four Days Off: One

[tinx_r]

Title: Four Days Off: One
Author: tinx_r
Fandom:Riptide
Pairing/Characters: Cody Allen/Nick Ryder
Challenge: Trapped for smallfandomfest, Beyond the Horizon for 7rainbowprompts
Crossposted: 7rainbowprompts, pier56, 7_suns
Rating/Category: R/Slash
Word Count: 2000
Summary: In the middle of the night, Cody comes to a decision...
Disclaimer: Not mine. No money being made. No copyright infringement intended.

Comments

Oh. My. God.

[mcsheplovers]

Absolutely beautiful. Stunningly beautiful.
This is my favorite of your stories thus far.
I'm a puddle on the floor. Guh. Speechless.

Let me count the ways that I love this particular story......

1) The cold.
When they're laying together, sitting together, touching each other....they're warm. The moment they separate, they freeze. Cody didn't even realize how cold he was until he climbed back into bed with Nick.

2) Misunderstandings.
Bless their little miscommunicating hearts. Nick thinks Cody wants to break up. Cody thinks Nick doesn't want to leave the MP's. Poor babies! They are both terrified to imagine a future without each other. They rip my heart out.

3) Nick cocooning himself in his blankets to hide his hurt and misery.
'Nuff said.

4) Make-up sex.
Subtle and lovely. They both feel much better once they reconnect. Love that Cody **has** to make love with Nick to feel good again.

......and finally, last but not least....

5) Cody's inability to (pick any of the following)communicate/deal with/face/share/ his feelings.Bless

Re: Oh. My. God.

[tinx_r]

Oh I am so glad you like it so much! In fact you are making me blush :)

I LOVE that you noticed the cold. I see that in canon even: they need to be warm, and when things are uncomfortable, they look cold and shivery. Warm's safe and it's what they give each other.

Bless his little repressed heart. Who did this to him? Who made him this way? I love that you delved a bit into his past and showed us a glimpse of his childhood.
Keep watching this space for more...

Did I mention how much I loved this story?
You are made of awesome.
So so glad you liked it! *hugs*
And *blush*

Re: Oh. My. God.

[oddmonster]

I love this comment.

Just wanted to say that. The moment they separate, they freeze. Oh go you.

Bless his little repressed heart. Who did this to him? Who made him this way? I love that you delved a bit into his past and showed us a glimpse of his childhood.
Squeak.

I love that Nick just keeps chipping away at that wall that Cody's built inside of him. True love baby!
Oh hell yeah.

Re: Oh. My. God.

[mcsheplovers]

Thank you. I couldn't help but get carried away a bit. This story is just....so..... them ya know?

Re: Oh. My. God.

[oddmonster]

It so is, Beth. It so is. *squee* (I'm a little carried away by this one too!)

Re: Oh. My. God.

[tinx_r]

You two are making me blush... *hugs*