Remix: Pay No Attention to the Boy Behind the Prince (Shroud the Moons by koslorollo)

[erinm_4600]

Title: Pay No Attention to the Boy Behind the Prince
Author: Erin (erinm_4600)
Summary: There's more to Jack than meets the eye and, much as he tries to avoid it, people can see it...
Rating: PG
Warnings: Wordcount sits at 6130. One simple line started this whole thing and, in order for this part to be written, that part had to be written. But, for that part

Comments

[koslorollo]

Still… incoherent.... Oh EEE! *clings* It's fabulous, fantastic, and brilliant, and you made me love them all over again which is not something I have felt for the next gen in quite some time. I just don't even know what to say at this point… Guh guh guh-goo-gee-guh!

Prince PIMA! Prince Pain In My Ass! I'm so glad you used that! I always thought it was one of DG's cleverer and snarkier moments. Ha!

Love the origin of the nicknames. Molasses! And the scene where Jack teases his sister to bits and pieces because of a nickname for a nickname, it's cute and emotional and a total "guh" moment.

The way you handled the after-scene of the queen's death is just winwin. But I think the most fantastic part was the Queen and Jack tea scene. I have unending love for the Queen and Jack, they're both so implacable and stubborn.

And please note that I noted this with vehemence and flail: …go south and become a fisherman. Even if you didn't mean it to be a Wind*Verse crossover thingy, it still made me laugh!

Yes, I remember (as if I needed to be reminded): I &hearts you. *curls up at your feet*

[erinm_4600]

I have to admit that the bit about the fisherman was just me trying to think of various places he could go and things he could do.. *still fails at the reading*

I've been wanting to quiz you all things Jack and Spice and Molasses for a MONTH.

You are gonna be so sick of me in July ;)

[koslorollo]

*boffs you on the head with a rolled-up newspaper* READ MOAR.

All right, I'm kidding… but I loved it though it wasn't intentional. BTW: Zero's dad = fisherman; Zero = from the south. All = Farine's laughter.

So this explains a lot, actually… I would've made a shit inspector. Why you read all the old drabbles that one time, and asked me about the "uncle" verses the "grandpa" thing. hehehehe, oh eee, the cleverness of you!

[erinm_4600]

I was still working on a plot at that point - finding a story, etc.

and then I caught that and went O.o

And the story was born... *sigh*

[koslorollo]

Btw, as you're a modly mod, I highly suggest disabling the use of custom presentation on comments, because this is very hard to read, rough on the old eyes and all. The plain LJ-way might work better. Just a suggestion. *ducks*

[kseda]

...oh it is so funny that you mention that.

[koslorollo]

Oh twas it nowww, how very curious, my dear!

[koslorollo]

Wow, that was really fast! *feels godly like EEE did the other day*

[erinm_4600]

[koslorollo]

*snort*

[erinm_4600]

No, it's kinda hard to read.. Of course, I also stare at computer screens all day, so...

*eyes cross*

[koslorollo]

I was using the style=mine trick, brought it into plain lj-way, but not everyone knows how to do that… 

[erinm_4600]

but not everyone knows how to do that…

*raises hand*

[koslorollo]

*coughs*

[erinm_4600]

*points to navbar*

Is that what that link does? I never clicked it...

*feels smarter*

[koslorollo]

And now it's … it's here.

OK, now… I want a million dollars in unmarked bills! GO!