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Challenge 20 - Intangible Spaces

Feb 12, 2009 20:13

Title: Intangible Spaces
Author: kseda
Team: Tin Men
Word Count: 535 (Bite me, okay?)
Rating: PG-13 (Awwwwww!)
Characters/Pairing: ...DG/Cain. Also DG/Glitch, DG/Raw, and the guys/each other. YEAH!
Disclaimer: Not mine, not now, not ever.
Challenge: 20 - "stick"

( Famous Foursome: you KNOW you want it. )

challenge 20 tin men, drabbles by: kseda

Comments 30

surranndie February 13 2009, 04:55:26 UTC

*is all warm and content* Oh, TEAM. *blissful sigh*

kseda February 13 2009, 04:57:24 UTC

They're so fucked up and adorable, I loffs them!

erinm_4600 February 13 2009, 04:57:31 UTC

Oh......

Damn you :p

kseda February 13 2009, 04:58:55 UTC

*preens*

averypartofme February 13 2009, 05:50:54 UTC

Oh.

Oh wow.

I love them all and want to cover you them in tiny hugs and kisses.

kseda February 13 2009, 12:23:37 UTC

*dances* Thank you! Glad you liked it, it's only been in my head since, um... May, I think? *headdesk*

lionille February 13 2009, 13:18:05 UTC

Oh.
My.
God.

This is astounding. What a glorious start to the morning.

I've read it twice, third time I was going to pick up things to quote, but it's all wonderful and vivid. A few of my especial favorite moments, though, were these:

until the light in his eyes shifted just so.

She came to Glitch's door swathed in silk and lace, every inch the princess

Now wearing nothing but a sapphire tiara

And the whole concept of WHERE she meets with each of them is so ingenius: the woodcarver in the sawdust, and the courtier in the fancy fabrics, and the viwer in the soft earth.

Then I got to the first phrase in this amazing part and actually gasped out loud from a sort of delighted surprise, because you just make it obvious somehow it's a Good Thing, and I just got happier with each passing word:

And some days she'd spy Glitch shaking sawdust from his coat, and some days Raw would be too slow covering a yawn to conceal a wine-blackened tongue, and some days she'd find Cain contemplating a yellow birch leaf.This was an absolutely ( ... )

kseda February 13 2009, 14:26:17 UTC

You are a glorious human being, you know that? I wish I had more than a "thank you" but... thank you, so much.

rissy_james February 13 2009, 14:54:51 UTC

...some days she'd find Cain contemplating a yellow birch leaf.

I do believe the proper term is ...

Guhbfffff.

Very well done. Its just... aww, its beautiful.

kseda February 13 2009, 15:31:17 UTC

*clings* Thank you!