original ficlet: Point of Origin

Feb 25, 2014 07:23

This was one of the Halloween stories that was late. Very late. Not my fault - blame the 'gentleman of fortune.'
Title: Point of Origin
Rating: Arrrr (R, for violence)
Note: Original story - do not copy

Point of Origin, Part 1 )

spooky, original

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evil_little_dog February 26 2014, 00:46:42 UTC
LIKE THIS SO MUCH. The fun juxtaposition of Shelby originally and pirate Shelby secondly is just a riot.

Two quibbly things - 'birthed' at the library should be 'berthed', and 'knawing' would be 'gnawing'.

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tinhutlady February 26 2014, 03:10:47 UTC
Knawing should have been caught (and was in the second section), but birthed? I blame spell check for that one. LOL
glad you are enjoying.

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evil_little_dog February 26 2014, 13:26:44 UTC
I am enjoying muchly.

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