I'm back~
So...I took this little break. And I'm ready to go back in to writing.
But before I begin to do so, I'm gonna need to do some...improvements I've noticed while I was "away". (I read my work and people's constructive comments). I saw that there's a lot of room for improvements.
I use too many similar words, my descriptions can be dull, my action sentences aren't so....colorful, story plot-- damn that gets me every single time. T.T But anyways! Just...before I begin to write any more series, one-shots, anything at all-- I want to improve. And I wanna become a better writer. I really appreciate all of those readers that added me and actually thanked me for adding because...I really should be thanking you for supporting me.
Because, if you really look at it....I suck. There's really, a bunch of people with better writing styles, vocabulary, and sentence structure. Heck I don't even have a beta. XD But for some reason, you guys like me so I really love you guys for that. Really. I mean...I haven't thought of it but I've been doing this for like....two years already and I saw that I made only little improvements here and there and I just really wanna step it up.
So! my list of improvements!!!
-Better vocabulary
This is essential. I don't want to bore you guys with "nodding" and "sighing" and "said" all the time....I know I use those words A LOT. Forgive me... T.T
-Better sentence structure
Fudge. Sometimes I do run-on sentences and its not good. I need to be structured! GAH.
-Better Plots
I have plots. I have them written down by hand. I know what I'm suppose to write but for some odd, idiotic reason when I think of something else that's "better" (when its really not) I completely change it and my story's changed. Gawd I need to stop doing that! AND! I need goals....I've got so many plots but it doesn't have a goal. Why is that so hard for me?!
-Better variety
I don't know...I just feel like I wanna do more than romance and fluff and attempt comedy...I don't wanna put "drama" as a genre I do cause I suck. BIG TIME.
-Basically Better EVERYTHING
I really wanna do better for you guys. I don't really think I'm cut out to be...this "really great author of yaoi fan fics" i just don't feel like I'm that talented.....I'm not being humble. Really. I know I need work so let me work on it. :]
SOOOO~ constructive criticism is a must!! I need more comments with criticism in them...^^; I love your usual "Good job! Update soon!" but...can you tell me what I need to work on? Please? I'll give you a cookie? XD
....erm....I think that's it!
I will be working on my current series! And look out for one-shots that'll pop up once in a while~ I'm going to attempt and do horror around...Halloween! Look forward to that....hmm....And Always keep the faith!! Dong Bang Shin Ki! FIGHTING!!!!!
But before I begin to do so, I'm gonna need to do some...improvements I've noticed while I was "away". (I read my work and people's constructive comments). I saw that there's a lot of room for improvements.
I use too many similar words, my descriptions can be dull, my action sentences aren't so....colorful, story plot-- damn that gets me every single time. T.T But anyways! Just...before I begin to write any more series, one-shots, anything at all-- I want to improve. And I wanna become a better writer. I really appreciate all of those readers that added me and actually thanked me for adding because...I really should be thanking you for supporting me.
Because, if you really look at it....I suck. There's really, a bunch of people with better writing styles, vocabulary, and sentence structure. Heck I don't even have a beta. XD But for some reason, you guys like me so I really love you guys for that. Really. I mean...I haven't thought of it but I've been doing this for like....two years already and I saw that I made only little improvements here and there and I just really wanna step it up.
So! my list of improvements!!!
-Better vocabulary
This is essential. I don't want to bore you guys with "nodding" and "sighing" and "said" all the time....I know I use those words A LOT. Forgive me... T.T
-Better sentence structure
Fudge. Sometimes I do run-on sentences and its not good. I need to be structured! GAH.
-Better Plots
I have plots. I have them written down by hand. I know what I'm suppose to write but for some odd, idiotic reason when I think of something else that's "better" (when its really not) I completely change it and my story's changed. Gawd I need to stop doing that! AND! I need goals....I've got so many plots but it doesn't have a goal. Why is that so hard for me?!
-Better variety
I don't know...I just feel like I wanna do more than romance and fluff and attempt comedy...I don't wanna put "drama" as a genre I do cause I suck. BIG TIME.
-Basically Better EVERYTHING
I really wanna do better for you guys. I don't really think I'm cut out to be...this "really great author of yaoi fan fics" i just don't feel like I'm that talented.....I'm not being humble. Really. I know I need work so let me work on it. :]
SOOOO~ constructive criticism is a must!! I need more comments with criticism in them...^^; I love your usual "Good job! Update soon!" but...can you tell me what I need to work on? Please? I'll give you a cookie? XD
....erm....I think that's it!
I will be working on my current series! And look out for one-shots that'll pop up once in a while~ I'm going to attempt and do horror around...Halloween! Look forward to that....hmm....And Always keep the faith!! Dong Bang Shin Ki! FIGHTING!!!!!