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timetraveled

fic: in your shoes

Apr 21, 2007 16:30

title: In your shoes
prompt: Reverse
pairing: James/Lily
words: 1925
rating: PG
note: For Morgan booyah_rock’s birthday!

( For fifteen years he’d put himself on a pedestal where he got everything he ever asked for, then Lily Evans had come along and kicked him off it. )

james/lily, fanfic

Comments 58

latine April 21 2007, 15:46:59 UTC

Hahahahaha, this was amazing. I hate how you write something so interesting and leave me with nothing to review about! I generally give good reviews, I promise, but when it comes down to you, I have NOTHING to say which is pretty great, and means that they're perfect :)

timetraveled April 21 2007, 20:25:53 UTC

Interesting is another word for bizzare, lol. Seriously, never hold back when commenting on my writing if there's something you didn't like or was unclear - I welcome constructive crit with open arms and cookies :)

Thanks for commenting, Sharon!

annabtg April 21 2007, 16:17:04 UTC

*hugs*

Beautiful piece! I really like how you developed James's character here. Great job! :))

See ya,
Anna.

timetraveled April 21 2007, 20:27:20 UTC

*return hugs*

I've written so much about James I should know his character inside out, but there are still things I have to learn :D Thanks.

♥

crystallicrain April 21 2007, 16:25:35 UTC

Amazing, as usual. I love this, it's just how I imagined James, I think. =]

timetraveled April 21 2007, 20:27:54 UTC

Yay for getting James spot on :) Thanks!

sidecar April 21 2007, 16:55:20 UTC

BEST. ONE. YET.

I have forgiven you for that last piece of TRASH. This has redeemed you. But if I ever catch you writing anything less cute or happy than this EVER AGAIN, you will not be included in my flist.

DOST THOU UNDERSTAND?

I <3 you, and this was lovely. :D

timetraveled April 21 2007, 20:29:31 UTC

WHY DO YOU ALWAYS LIKE THE DRABBLES I BARELY LIKE? It's really confusing.

Redeemed me! Lol! That's great news :D

♥ you too.

lilyofgryfindor April 21 2007, 17:05:40 UTC

Oh I absolutely love this one! I really liked the different perspective that you (or Lily?) showed James. I like that he changed but didn't come right out of character & say "I'm not going to be a bullying toerag anymore." He remained in character & still mischevious (I can't spell that for the life of me, oh well).

As usual, it's really tremedously enjoyable to read. :]

timetraveled April 21 2007, 20:41:36 UTC

:) Many thanks! I didn't want James to completely change for Lily. If he had and been with Lily then, it would have just been an act he was putting on, not being himself :\ You can change certain things for the people you love but not everything.

God, I really love your icon, you know XD

lilyofgryfindor April 22 2007, 02:57:40 UTC

thanks it's a Shoebox quote, I really like yours too. :]