WHAT's THIS?!?!?!?! IT STILL HURTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOOK AT THESE WORDS OF BEAUTY THAT YOU HAVE SLICED AND CARVED INTO MY KOKORO
It’s not conscious, just familiarity around friends. What’s foreign is that wistful smile on Chanyeol’s face a year ago when he tapped Yifan’s cheek. That look of trust and fondness on his face. No, actually, that expression has grown familiar too. What’s strange is the pain that wells up in his chest at the mere thought of it.
Chanyeol nods and closes his eyes, listening to Yifan’s departure, letting the heat on his cheek dissipates until nothing’s left, but forgiveness.
WHY TIMESHAKER-NIM WHY WHY WHY DO YOU HURT ME SO I'M SOBS
also i didn't realise this was set in the 1940s (sort of) until the second scene sobs it brings such a feeling of melancholy in me with the war and everything ;;;;
"bc course of ~true love~ never did run smooth" SHAKESPEARE HAS NOTHING ON THE GREATNESS OF THE KRISYEOL SHIP no titanic no humungous iceberg would ever fucking sink this ship (as long
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pls don't add that -nim, stl-sshi ;~; just call me timeshaker......￢_￢
you still make me laugh with your comments but in a good(?) way! what is all this japanese, sobbing. lol you always say the most ridiculously outrageous nice things, unrgh, please allow me to squish you into a fluffy ball and toast you like a marshmallow and...eat you, ig what is life..hmmm, life is a box of chocolates, i always end up eating the turkish delight that i hate so much pls fix your brokoro by watching totoro /o/
why is it that i already started tearing up a little by the end? (secretly im glad u didnt finish this because i know i woulda bawled my eyes out). reading ur krisyeol is always magical. the part where kris thought that chanyeols touch is both antidote and poison. loved how it was phrased but omg the au u set this in. the korean war. i like how you built it up bit by bit. and chanyeols code. (cant believe u typed all that in one night!)
i can't think of a realistic happy ending so i'd rather not, too. one of them is going to war and...idw to write that ._. thank you so so much, writing krisyeol is always enjoyable to me it was a maddening drive to write, honestly. i've never had that before lol, i thought i'd finish this within the night back then. so naive, omg. the whole plot had been drafted but it all fizzled out next morning /o\ (i edited after posting though, heh)
thank you so much for reading, too. this sounds weird, but i didn't think of this as a war au when i wrote it, haha i think there are already war aus out there though :D
beautiful... short. and krisyeol... no. no, i mean... yes. i dont know wat to say anymore no. this is krisyeol angst and no i dont like angst. but, no... i loved it... hated it too. no. gosh. whats this feeling!
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hello, stl-sshi :D
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WHAT's THIS?!?!?!?! IT STILL HURTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOOK AT THESE WORDS OF BEAUTY THAT YOU HAVE SLICED AND CARVED INTO MY KOKORO
It’s not conscious, just familiarity around friends. What’s foreign is that wistful smile on Chanyeol’s face a year ago when he tapped Yifan’s cheek. That look of trust and fondness on his face. No, actually, that expression has grown familiar too. What’s strange is the pain that wells up in his chest at the mere thought of it.
Chanyeol nods and closes his eyes, listening to Yifan’s departure, letting the heat on his cheek dissipates until nothing’s left, but forgiveness.
WHY TIMESHAKER-NIM WHY WHY WHY DO YOU HURT ME SO I'M SOBS
also i didn't realise this was set in the 1940s (sort of) until the second scene sobs it brings such a feeling of melancholy in me with the war and everything ;;;;
"bc course of ~true love~ never did run smooth" SHAKESPEARE HAS NOTHING ON THE GREATNESS OF THE KRISYEOL SHIP no titanic no humungous iceberg would ever fucking sink this ship (as long ( ... )
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you still make me laugh with your comments but in a good(?) way! what is all this japanese, sobbing.
lol you always say the most ridiculously outrageous nice things, unrgh, please allow me to squish you into a fluffy ball and toast you like a marshmallow and...eat you, ig
what is life..hmmm, life is a box of chocolates, i always end up eating the turkish delight that i hate so much
pls fix your brokoro by watching totoro /o/
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the part where kris thought that chanyeols touch is both antidote and poison. loved how it was phrased
but omg
the au u set this in. the korean war. i like how you built it up bit by bit. and chanyeols code. (cant believe u typed all that in one night!)
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thank you so so much, writing krisyeol is always enjoyable to me
it was a maddening drive to write, honestly. i've never had that before lol, i thought i'd finish this within the night back then. so naive, omg. the whole plot had been drafted but it all fizzled out next morning /o\ (i edited after posting though, heh)
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In a good way.
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i think there are already war aus out there though :D
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short. and krisyeol...
no.
no, i mean... yes.
i dont know wat to say anymore no. this is krisyeol angst and no i dont like angst. but, no...
i loved it... hated it too.
no. gosh. whats this feeling!
hey, really, is there more? ;; ;;
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and sorry, but there rly isn't anymore /o\
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