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[timesbeheld]

life seems to be a weak chain
the rusted links hitting the ground
they shatter and fall
like the soul and the heart
the creatures they watch
they want your soul
the vessel you carry
it only a prize
the links make you heavy
you run and you cry
but the broken soul just makes you die

Comments

[ragnorok22]

Human beings were made to be weak creatures we are forced to rely on others to surive

Cept for a few of us who chose pain and suffering over teamwork

[timesbeheld]

>_> what the fuck are u talking about?

[ragnorok22]

nevermind you don't get it

[timesbeheld]

T_T but i want to get it

[ragnorok22]

Basically I was trying to paraphrase what I thought that your poem was meaning at how humans are weak creatures by ourselves but even when we work togather we can break like links in a chain

[timesbeheld]

yah im REALLY pissed right now. mr drouin is being an ass

[ragnorok22]

I noticed did he give you any lenacy because yoiu were out for like two weeks?

But your lucky in my class with him we have to present a ten minute speech with only a visaul aid about our resaerch topic

[timesbeheld]

fun he wouldnt even let me turn in mine!

[ragnorok22]

My calss had a 70% fail rate because they didn't do it

[timesbeheld]

ok thats just sad