Fic: A Wheel Within A Wheel, Laura & Billy, (1/1)

Oct 24, 2009 22:52

Title: A Wheel Within a Wheel
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica (TV Show)
Characters: Roslin & Billy
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst
Summary: There’s an order to death. To a long lingering death. He thinks...
Length: 734 words
Status: Complete
A/N: Fourth part in the series. But each one can be read as a one-shot just timeline-ing the connection between ( Read more... )

status: complete, genre: angst, length: 0-1000, title: a wheel within a wheel, fandom: bsg, rating: pg-13

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cartography October 24 2009, 21:59:57 UTC
This time? *looks hopeful* I prepared this bit of text and everything!

Hope is the last to die. And it’s oddly poetic that it is. She is hope (...)
I love this bit so much, but my favourite line is the following, and I can't even really say why:

He can’t see any Gods in that.

And Billy counting her breaths made me cry. Actually cry. I should stop re-reading. *sniffles*

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dani101 October 25 2009, 07:46:09 UTC
"He stays by her side long after she falls asleep and because he still can, he counts her breaths."

Oh,dear.That brought tears in my eyes.Lovelyy writen.

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lindsey_grissom November 4 2009, 22:32:22 UTC
Sorry I took so long getting back to you.

Thank you sweetie! :)

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pandj1958 November 10 2009, 08:10:12 UTC
Your a beautiful writer and this is a beautiful piece. I wish I could be as coherent in my review as you are in your story but alas I am not. Just know it is frickin gorgeous.

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lindsey_grissom November 10 2009, 08:40:46 UTC
Thank you sweetie. Really, thank you. Your words mean a lot. <3

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obsessive_a101 January 15 2011, 06:08:49 UTC
*just... gulps down deep breaths and continues crying*

GAH! BILLY! LAURA!!!

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lindsey_grissom January 16 2011, 19:47:45 UTC
*hands over tissues*

I know. I know. You know, there's still one more final part to this series...but well, you can probably guess what that one's based on and somehow I can never seem to force myself to write it. Maybe I should though. I'll bring more tissues.

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