Original: Men in Tights Rewrite (Slash)

[time_warper]

A while back someone wrote a review of this story saying that it was a good idea, but poorly executed. I was miffed at first, but when I reread it I realized they were right. This being the case, I decided to rewrite it. It is now twice as long. I wonder at what point things are considered short stories...?

Comments

[tygati]

The ending's a little rough, but overall it was fun. ^__^ I love that he decided to be a supervillian so he could ogle his crush in tights. *cackle*

And you should totally do something with Alex. Maybe Alex can help Avian create a new hero-type identity now that he's gonna be JJ's partner. ;)

[time_warper]

haha, yeah, the ending is rough. I suck at endings. Thanks for reading!
(Avian likes being a villain; he can see Steven in tights whenever he wants, rather than waiting for someone else to commit a crime.)

[tygati]

Very good point. ^__^ I wonder if he can be a sort of sneaky anti-hero sort, doing villain-y things from the shadows that sekkritly help out JJ while still maintaining his Evil Image.

... now I kinda want to dabble in superheroes. >.>;;

[time_warper]

o.0 Do it! I <3 your stories, so you + superheros = awesome.
(my fav. characters are the red dragon and his treasure <3)

[tygati]

*grin* Ruadh and Vinni are two of my favorites also. Definitely my favs from Dragon Isles. ^_^

I started poking into superheroes once before, but it didn't go anywhere... probably because it was too solemn, I think. I need to go for something more flamboyant and silly, because that's what I'm better at. ^^;;

I also want to dabble in ESPers, because something about that genre always pushes my happy buttons.

[time_warper]

:D their relationship is...fiery :D

You are very good at flamboyant and silly *nods*. I would very much like a flamboyant and silly superhero. I'll do a fic trade for it *nods again* because that is something I'd very much like to see.

Ooh. ESPers. Do that too! :D

[tygati]

Heh, well, would you settle for a rather silly villain? ^^; Cause that's what bit, and so that's what I'm working on.

[time_warper]

!!! <3 I love silly villains! (Hence, Avian, and why I've obsessively watched Megamind)

[tygati]

Awesomesauce. <3

Write me more of Avian's antics, and I'll share what I have written? ;)

[time_warper]

Hmmm~antics eh? I can do that. Hmm. I could write his origin story. I'll have to think though, I don't have any other plots planned out.

[tygati]

*snerk* Well, by the time you figure it out, you may have an entire ficbit as reward. *laugh* My muses really like you, it seems.

[time_warper]

I'm glad they like me. They are welcome to play any time :)

[tygati]

P.S. If this turns into smut, I'm so totally blaming you. >.>;

[time_warper]

Nope. Not my fault that you have a dirty mind. :P :)