Fic: In Human Hands (23/30?)

Nov 07, 2010 17:59

Title: In Human Hands
Author: rallalon
Beta: vyctori
Rating: PG13, AU towards the end of Season One; 9!Smith.
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summary:
He’s not mad. Maybe he’s a little looser in the head than he should be, but he’s hardly mad.

That he feels like he should ask someone to check is probably a bad sign.

The Waitress )

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mylittlepwny November 7 2010, 18:23:42 UTC
I HAVEN'T HAD HOME INTERNET ACCESS FOR A MONTH NOW. THE FACT THAT YOU POSTED THIS ON A DAY I AM STAYING AT MY AUNTS AND THEREFORE ABLE TO SPEND AS MUCH TIME AS HUMANLY POSSIBLE RELOADING MY FLIST SO AS NOT TO MISS A THING TELLS ME THAT THERE IS A GOD, AND HE LOVES THIS FIC JUST AS MUCH AS I DO.

reading, brb.

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rallalon November 11 2010, 00:02:18 UTC
I'm glad that when I finally do post, I happen to have good timing. Hope your internet gets better.

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geordie_chick November 7 2010, 18:41:29 UTC
Wonderful, amazing and beautiful.

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rallalon November 11 2010, 00:02:26 UTC
Thank you!

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2nd2ndalto November 7 2010, 19:34:16 UTC
My thoughts exactly. This was FANTASTIC. What a nice surprise on my flist today!

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rallalon November 11 2010, 00:03:34 UTC
Ehe, thank you!

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rallalon November 11 2010, 00:03:21 UTC
Aww, thank you. I will admit, I'm amazed at the degree people are still following despite my crazy delays. Thanks for sticking around.

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annissag November 7 2010, 19:06:22 UTC
Hahaha! I just checked LJ because I was bored and literally gasped when I saw this posted. It scared my son a little.

***

Just read the new chapter and loved every word of it. Thank you!

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rallalon November 11 2010, 00:04:42 UTC
Oh, goodness. Scary all around, this chapter. Thanks for reading!

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takethewords November 7 2010, 19:13:05 UTC
She’ll be home.

He clutches those words and presses them against the chaos in his mind like ice on a sprain, like a bandage on a wound, like the temporary aid that they are.

Perfect. He needs her so desperately, and this conveys that beautifully. This whole chapter was wonderful and painful, I was scared right along with John.

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rallalon November 11 2010, 00:05:58 UTC
Thank you!

I was scared right along with John

After a chapter like this one, it really intrigues me that people are still calling him John.

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