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fic: high above the forest floor

May 02, 2010 13:33

Title: High Above the Forest Floor
Author: nocookiesjustbooks 2nd2ndalto
Beta: iluvmusicals
Character/Pairing: Tenth Doctor/Rose Tyler
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: BBC owns everything, obviously
Author's Notes: Written for the prompt challenge at never_ever_will, with fond memories of Cathedral Grove on Vancouver Island.

( Rose stepped out of the TARDIS onto spongy green moss... )

Comments 22

kimber_mcleod May 2 2010, 19:34:47 UTC

That was both visually stunning and completely squeeworthy. Loved it. :D

2nd2ndalto May 9 2010, 00:26:27 UTC

Thanks you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

angelofprey May 2 2010, 21:51:44 UTC

Hee hee, loved it!

*now has the urge to go to Costa Rica for the tree-gliding thing*

2nd2ndalto May 9 2010, 00:26:55 UTC

I know, right? Makes me want to go zip-lining again!

julesndairyland May 3 2010, 02:23:41 UTC

"Can we do that again?" Rose breathed.

"Which part?" he blurted out, then immediately looked abashed.

Rose grinned. "All of it."

"Oh, yes."

Great ending!
I love the visuals you create in this story.

2nd2ndalto May 9 2010, 00:27:24 UTC

Thank you! I kind of liked the ending, too. :)

mrs_roy May 3 2010, 04:48:32 UTC

"Well, that was different," Rose returned breathlessly. "Did that to save your life."

The Doctor's expression softened. "Yes, you did," he agreed gently, and Rose had to look away from the tenderness in his gaze, her lightheadedness no longer entirely due to their precarious perch.

I adore the way they're stuck way up there, yet still manage to have their tender moment.

Gorgeous.

2nd2ndalto May 9 2010, 00:27:53 UTC

Thank you! Aww, Ten/Rose.

sapphire_child May 3 2010, 04:53:40 UTC

Oh I love them. And I love how gentle he is with her, helping her to overcome her fear of the height. And I love this fic. Lovely!

2nd2ndalto May 9 2010, 00:28:09 UTC

Thanks for the lovely comments!