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Fic: In Human Hands (14/24?)

Jul 19, 2009 14:36

Title: In Human Hands
Author: rallalon | Rall
Beta: vyctori
Rating: PG13, AU towards the end of Season One; 9!Smith.
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summary: He wants to say he’s overreacting. He knows he’s overreacting. But he knows why he is, even if he’s hardly about to say it, hardly about to admit it, even to himself. And with that sort of a reason for reacting, it’ ( Read more... )

fic, romance, ninth doctor, ninth doctor fic

Comments 60

amberfocus July 20 2009, 06:51:05 UTC

Oh, you posted! Runs off to read.

ETA: Another lovely chapter. These two need to realize they're never better apart than when they are together. And act on it just a bit. Little bitty bit. I know he's jealous how much time she spends on that watch but one day he'll know it's for him. I just hope he doesn't manage to do something stupid in jealousy before then to try to drive her away.

rallalon July 20 2009, 18:07:04 UTC

These two need to realize they're never better apart than when they are together.

Oh, he's realized it. He definitely has. He just doesn't like it. Rose and her thoughts, on the other hand, will remain a mystery.

And act on it just a bit. Little bitty bit.

An itty bitty bit?

Thanks for reading!

amberfocus July 20 2009, 19:16:22 UTC

Or, you know, a lot. Massive snogs would not be unwelcome. *grins*

rallalon July 21 2009, 01:09:17 UTC

You mean, something like:

The stone is hot beneath him where he sits on their bench, but she's stolen the shade, leaving him to sweat and drip like the chilled bottle between his hands. He brings the cold glass to his neck and savours the freeze against his skin, feels it trickle into his blood and slowly spread. He sighs, mouth relaxed ( ... )

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fishface44 July 20 2009, 07:03:27 UTC

I was just wishing for a new chapter today, and I came looking for this. Thank you!!! Brilliant, as always. And you break my heart a bit every time.

rallalon July 20 2009, 18:08:15 UTC

Heheh, great timing, eh? Glad you liked it and I hope that heart doesn't hurt too much.

sundance201 July 20 2009, 07:17:06 UTC

Absolutely lovely! These two never fail to break my heart just a little bit. Their relationship is so perfect and this last exchange was just....fantastic. ;) I really can't tell you how much reading this chapter made my day.

rallalon July 20 2009, 18:14:32 UTC

Thank you so much!

Their relationship is so perfect

The way I write, I section off a part of my brain, infuse it with the voice of a character, and then combine the character with the plot or with another character to have it all play out. Basically, I make up voices in my head to play with. I tell you this in order to explain that when I read that piece of your comment, the section of my brain that has been occupied by the human Doctor immediately began shouting. Loudly. He doesn't feel it's perfect at all and is in fact kind of anguished. He has a well formulated argument of why it's not perfect (and then he thinks about holding her and sorta zones out, having proven himself wrong).

...Yeah. It's interesting.

sundance201 July 20 2009, 23:29:27 UTC

lol, I suppose that you can console the human Doctor with the fact that I didn't mean the relationship itself is perfect, but perfect under the circumstances you've created...that's the way that it would happen.

And actually, I think that what you said explains why. :)

juliet316 July 20 2009, 07:44:52 UTC

Ack! Somebody bought the watch!

I hope their able to track down who it was sold to and find it!

Lovely exchange at the end.

rallalon July 20 2009, 18:14:51 UTC

Thank you!

mitashade July 20 2009, 07:49:21 UTC

Okay first let me get this outta the way:

Eeeeeeeeeeee!! New chapter!!!!!! :D *fangirl!squee*

Okay, that's done. :)

Loved this new chapter... I got all sniffly when he took off, thinking about everything. And Rose was so freaking excited, but NOOOOOOOOOOOO of course someone bought the freaking watch. *sigh* I this person is most likely aware of it's actual value, I'm sure. Or at least partly.

Well I really have to leave (heading out for a 24 hour drive/day at the theme park down in Toronto :D), so I'll leave with another *fangirl!squee!!!*

:D

rallalon July 20 2009, 18:21:44 UTC

Aww, thank you!

I got all sniffly when he took off, thinking about everything. And Rose was so freaking excited,

These two more or less specialize in missing what the other person is feeling or talking about. Just a bit.

I see and appreciate your wondering, but, as always, no comment there.

Have fun when you get there! *waves*