Fic: Non-Linear Love Story (2/6)

[rallalon]

Title: Non-Linear Love Story
Author: rallalon | Rall
Beta: vyctori, latintabasco
Rating: Adult (For clarification on my take on the alien aspects, it's the same as in Scratching the Itch.)
Character Focus: Doctor, Eighth.
Disclaimer: Do not own. Credit to Vyc for finding the song (for she is brilliant and knows her stuff).
X-Posted to halfhumandoctor

Summary: He’s been spun by world

Comments

[dark_aegis]

Oh, I love this so very much. Is it wrong of me to be especially appreciative of the way this chapter ended? And the way I suspect this is going to go? I can't wait to see what's next...especially since now comes the war.

[rallalon]

Thank you! I'm glad I've got you curious.

[amberfocus]

This is just really brilliant. I love how slowly everything plays out between them as if there is all the time in the world, and yet the urgency of war is about to break over him. The way that they are together is breathtaking. Thanks for the lovely update.

[rallalon]

And thank you for reading it!

[ladyyueh]

latintabasco was right. It just gets better.

And I wish I could say more and express how truly fantastic this is but I have to go catch the bus or be late for class!

Will return to give you all your praise.

ETA: Okay, I think I've figured out what it is I love about this story. Yes, it's sexy, plot-y, original all that good stuff. But, it's your turn of phrase. Some bit or other will pop out at me and be cute, funny, hot, etc. but at the same time it will fit. You make it work. So lots of love for you and your betas who provide us with such engrossing fic.

[rallalon]

Heheh, ah, it's the return of the bouncing. Thank you so much!

[angel932]

This story is brilliant. You are just breaking my heart.

I'm nearly speechless.

Brilliant.

[rallalon]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[rallalon]

Heheh, thank you.

And is that Fitz being obscene in the background?

Well, that's open to interpretation, but... Possibly.