Advent Calendar 21

[sap1066]

Story: 'Advent Calendar'
Characters: Nine/Rose
Rated: Adult
Disclaimer: I resent the BBC. They own the lot.
Content: Romance; Graphic Sex; Humour; PWP.
Chapters: 21/24
Summary: 24 days. 24 positions. Seriously.

December 21

Comments

[miladyhawke]

Aww, that was so sweet and lovely, just gorgeous and warm and glowing. I'm really impressed how you can write with such a wide range of styles!

[sap1066]

Yeah, I liked that one. A bit of a change from yesterdays and tomorrows though.

[sap1066]

Thanks.

[emmy_bemmy]

Now this was truely beautiful.

Makes up for yesterdays a thousand times over!

[sap1066]

Hmmmm *goes to look at what you said about yesterdays*

[sap1066]

So - sees that you didn't write anything about yesterdays which is most unusual and realises that you must have hated it. Acknowledges that have serious problems with writing dialogue which has been an issue before. However - goes onto salute you for being honest and not being insincerely flattering, which I do believe we have had words about before. Humbly suggests that you skip tomorrows which is much like yesterdays and try 23rd/24th instead. Love and kisses. sap1066

[emmy_bemmy]

Erm, I don't think I actually said anything about yesterdays.

I was so disturbed with the Jackie thing that I believe I just left it unsaid.

[eenigmatic]

He stared at her, and ‘I love you’ was in his eyes, in the touch of his fingertips, in the beating of his hearts.
Isn't that just the sentence that sums up Nine, though? Beautiful.

[sap1066]

*sighs* I agree.

[halfrek2]

is it bad that i am thinking that i dont want the 24th to come b/c that means the end? very touching chapter.