Well, this is a bit different, and lovely and poetic. I can picture them in Greece. I'd love to see how their relationship changes when they can't travel as much. Really liked the Barcelona bit.
I can offer my services as BR/britpicker if you like. ruth@sensiblecat.co.uk
I really enjoyed the concept of this story. I like this being a post-Doomsday setting and how the Doctor has realized how the Vortex has changed Rose. I like this small look at how they would go on.
One nitpick is that it didn't feel finished, though. How long are they temporally stranded? Does the Doctor ever fix the TARDIS? And what of Athos? Do they take Athos along when they travel? Are they actually living in the house, or is the TARDIS just in or behind the house?
Anyway, this story made me want to know more about their lives.
Well, it's just the first part. There is more forthcoming, in the immediate future, and I do hope to continue it for a good while. There will be plot, and the Doctor may eventually fix the poor TARDIS. Athos gets left, because at some point he's old enough to fend for himself. They are living in the house, but that TARDIS is in the backyard somewhere.
All of those are good questions, and I think there's a bit more explanation of that sort of thing in the next bit. Thank you!
Something different...nice. I'm assuming there will be more parts, each from a different place they've visited/lived, going with the "postcards" theme? Clever!
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I can offer my services as BR/britpicker if you like. ruth@sensiblecat.co.uk
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And I may just take you up on your offer, if it would be alright. That'd be fantastic.
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One nitpick is that it didn't feel finished, though. How long are they temporally stranded? Does the Doctor ever fix the TARDIS? And what of Athos? Do they take Athos along when they travel? Are they actually living in the house, or is the TARDIS just in or behind the house?
Anyway, this story made me want to know more about their lives.
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All of those are good questions, and I think there's a bit more explanation of that sort of thing in the next bit. Thank you!
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