New fic: Everybody's Talking 1/1

[wendymr]

Story: Everybody's Talking
Author: WMR
Characters: Ten, Rose
Rated: PG13 (for language, mostly)
Spoilers: Only up to TCI, really
Summary: "That a crime or something? It’s New Year’s Eve. I just want to dance with my best mate.”

Note: AU - explanation below cut. Set a year after the Doctor's regeneration. Oh, and pure fluff warning.

AU - Assumes no

Comments

[ceolnamara]

Oh, well done! Great story.

[wendymr]

Thank you very much! :)

[snuffykin]

I don't usually say this but my first thoughts were...Awww. Just awwwww. Whatacutecouple and tenissocuddlesome. I'm getting all mushy and grinning like a silly. Awww!

[wendymr]

Yeah, it is kind of over-fluffy, really, isn't it? Ah well, I promise I'll do better next time ;)

(Thanks. Glad you liked it!)

[neadods]

There is no such thing as "over fluffy" unless you've got unicorns and "molten cores" and exploding rainbows.

This... this is sweet. That's different. And Of The Good.

[wendymr]

LOL! Thank you :) Seriously, glad you liked it.

And... molten cores? If I ever write that, feel free to kick me. Hard.

[scornedsaint]

OMG love.

So fluffy, but so enjoyable.

[wendymr]

Thank you! Yes, way too fluffy, really. Must do better ;)

[un_sedentary]

Awwww!!! *happy sigh* That was lovely. :)))

Look at your formatting on this part, though -
“Let’s just forget it, Doctor,” she urges him. “Told you, I’ll be fine later. Tomorrow. I’ve just had a few drinks, that’s all.”

Her hand is taken suddenly, long fingers curling around hers. “Why is it important, Rose? If you want to dance, we both know there’s lots of blokes you can dance with.”

But lovely story!!! :)))

[wendymr]

Thanks - had a bit of trouble with Word's Track Changes function; I hit it accidentally, but the markup wasn't showing in my document. :P I'd just seen it myself and fixed it when I refreshed and saw your post.

Anyway, thanks! Glad you liked it :)

[debs7]

awwww that was incredibly awesome - just the right amount of seetness without being over-the-top.

Although in the middle you have a sentence or two underlined - is that meant to be that way?

I will definitely be keeping this one for future rereading.

[wendymr]

Thank you very much! Glad you think I got the balance right - I certainly didn't want to overdo it, especially at the end.

Yeah, as I said to un_sedentary above, it was a bit of a mishap with Track Changes. *hates that function*. All fixed now!