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Jun 19, 2006 01:36

Title: Continuation Theory ( Read more... )

fic, romance, tenth doctor, ninth doctor

Comments 6

midasu June 19 2006, 03:27:07 UTC

Hi, your post seems to have some kind of error. But the post is still readable and extremely good. I really like it, you have a nice tone in it, I don't really know how to describe it, I just like it.

oltha_heri June 19 2006, 03:58:14 UTC

I love Rose, Bad Wolf fics, especially well written ones like this. Well at this point I am assuming golden thingies equal bad wolf remenants.

Also there seems to be some mark up problems, nothing terrible just off, according to the text it is here
“Its not like that. Its not like that for you or anyone. Do you see, Rose, I don’t- I don’t change. Well, I mean, I change, but I don’t really change
that is throwing it all off.

wiccagal_1996 June 19 2006, 05:28:03 UTC

The storys brilliant so far, can't wait for next bit. Can't offer my opinion on the page errors...I'm html intollerant ;-)
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lovely amyj1986 June 19 2006, 08:34:41 UTC

I absolutely adore these lines:
“If anything happened to you-”

“You’d have died?” she suggested in an attempt at lightening things. The look on his face was frightening her.

“No,” he said, “I’d have lived. And that would have been worse.”

Well done!

centaurea_m June 20 2006, 10:32:01 UTC

The "She tasted surprised..." sentence has such good phrasing, almost musical. Liked the darkness, and the Nine-Ten continuity.