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May 28, 2006 22:06

Title: Broken (7 ( Read more... )

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dark_aegis May 29 2006, 02:18:35 UTC

Oh, very nice. There was a lot to love in this chapter :) And I'm definitely glad you didn't take the regen-route. This works far, far better than that would've. Very nice :) And I love the Doctor's rationalizations as he's trying to avoid thinking about Rose. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

debs7 May 29 2006, 02:31:38 UTC

Excellent Chapter. I adore the Doctor's stream of counciousness :)

coaldustcanary May 29 2006, 02:48:26 UTC

Sweet flustered Doctor and a very lovely chapter. Adorable, in fact.

In the meantime, he had forgotten what happened the last time he fell asleep in Rose Tyler’s bed.

But we readers so haven't... *EG*

satine79 May 29 2006, 04:04:18 UTC

Oh yay!! That was lovely and sweet and not-too fluffy! I adored it - can't wait to read more *g*

sandsofpatience May 29 2006, 04:37:17 UTC

I am glad of the vortex's effect on Rose coz like previous chapters comments if she regenerated it would be rather cheesy, but yay! That last line well, I wonder what could happen this time he is in the same bed ;)... Great chapter can't wait for more!