comment_fic 366-370: Supernatural, original, Charmed

Nov 05, 2010 09:26



Title: the final prayer
Fandom: Supernatural
Disclaimer: not my characters
Warnings: spoilers for season 6
Pairings: none stated
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 160
Point of view: third
Prompt: Sam + Lucifer, "But who prays for Satan? Who in eighteen centuries, has had the common humanity to pray for the one sinner that needed it most?" - Mark Twain

He prays that one day Lucifer will reach the point he asks forgiveness. )

gen, title: i, title: t, rated pg, fanfic: charmed, wordcount: drabble, fic, fanfic: supernatural, series: comment_fic, title: h, point of view: third person, tv fic

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realpestilence May 29 2011, 03:26:53 UTC
I previously avoided reading this Charmed drabble because of the title and it being about their baby selves-didn't interest me, I thought it was going to be cutesy. I should have known better! ~sheepish grin

I love this one. It makes me think of a broken ring, snapped in unequal halves-it's still not whole until it's put back together, doesn't matter if the pieces are uneven. Neither of them is complete without the other, because it takes more than ~just the power to make them themselves.

It does make me wonder what they'll become, when they're grown. How close will they be, if they're like this already? And how much damage will they do to each other, fighting it, fighting to keep it, trying to change each other's aims, when they can't really get away from each other? ~muses

I just...got an image of Wyatt, pinning Chris's hands down during sex, maintaining eye contact so there's no way either of them can deny what's happening. Pre "I'll never let you go" roar of claiming, heh. Oh, my!

Though one thing many toppy "claimers" seem to overlook that by claiming, they are, in turn, allowing themselves to ~be claimed...which may not always be comfortable for them, or what they wanted when they got possessive, etc. Hmm. Thinky thoughts!

Never mind me, I'm just bemoaning the lack of a really active fandom for this ship, and people to talk to about it. I could try leaving prompts at the charmedprompt comm, but somehow, I don't think I'd have much luck. BOO! D:

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tigriswolf May 30 2011, 03:05:24 UTC
Aww, what about the title chased you off?

There's a Charmed prompt community?

Thank you so much!

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realpestilence May 30 2011, 03:09:30 UTC
It just sounded like it was going to be cute domestic baby stuff, but then I remembered that tigris doesn't write cute, lol. I like what you did write very much, and find it a fascinating concept.

http://charmedprompts.livejournal.com/profile/

I just found it, so I don't know how active it is. But there's the link.

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