comment_fic 176-180: Supernatural/Paradise Lost, Supernatural, and Leverage

[tigriswolf]

Title: an abundance of wings
Fandom: Supernatural/Paradise Lost
Disclaimer: not my characters
Warnings: spoilers for 5.8
Pairings: none stated
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 280
Point of view: third
Prompt: Gabriel, his distance from Heaven isn't physical

Comments

[melanth0]

ohhhhh

I love them all.

and the last one reminds me of "he lays down his head on your pillow at night," which is still my favorite of yours.

[tigriswolf]

Thank you for reading! I do have a softspot for that one.

[bonestoss]

I really enjoyed reading all of them, but wanted to comment specifically on "when the rich wage war." Castiel aside, I first thought, "Dean would never!" when reading. But then wondered exactly how far Dean would go for Sam when push comes to shove. If/when Sam consents, will Dean--who has seen the future and as a result is presently doing everything in his power to circumvent it--allow that wearisome, tired, terrible future he has seen in 5x04 come to being? Will he watch the inevitable fall of humanity as he prepares (a fruitless attempt) to kill his little brother? Or will he say Yes before the angels take off, because of what he'd seen? Or maybe, he'll do what your comment fic suggests and just "let it go" to stand by Sam (it's all going to hell anyway, right? May as well make the most of it, so to speak). Who knows. I love it.

(ps: you have my dream hubbie in your icons. The pathfinder one is what initially drew me in to read your comment fics, haha)

[tigriswolf]

Thank you for reading! It's my personal canon that if Dean can't keep Sam from saying yes, he'll simply change sides. *shrugs*

(I have a couple Karl Urban icons, *hee*)

[framedhim]

I had read these earlier and came back to them tonight. I do love a long fic but the short ones, such as these, they tend to captivate. I'm hung dry and laid bare with "when the rich wage war". Fantastic.

With "an abundance of wings", it was simply "Gabriel takes a deep breath, spreads his wings, and soars to the dark backroad where a beast of a car is eating up the miles".

I don't know why that line, but truly, yes. Guh.

[tigriswolf]

Thank you so much!

[dark_princess17]

I am in complete and utter awe every single time I come over here and read your stories! They're freaking amazing! I love it when short works like these have such power behind them; making every word count ... and it WORKS!!!

An excellent job!

~Megan

[tigriswolf]

Oh, thank you so very much!

[scout_lover]

Love "Ghosts"! It slots in perfectly with my own view of Eliot's past, and the shadow it throws across his present and future. Of course he's got bad guys after him (really, really bad guys), simply because of the nature of what he did before. The worst Hardison, Parker and Sophie have ever had to worry about, really, is getting caught by the proper authorities. For Eliot, "proper authorities" are the least of his worries.

And I love that what does worry him is not his ghosts catching up with him, but getting at him through the team. He's got something to lose now, and that's got to scare the bejeezus out of him.

Nicely done!

[tigriswolf]

Thank you for reading!