You've done the one grammatical error that irks me beyond all others: you spelled tomorrow wrong. I hate it when people do that, I've got no idea why, but I just cannot STAND that.
But other than that, all sounds pretty spiffy. And speaking of seven eleven stories... one time me and Katy (Roulston), back in the day when we were still best friends) walked up to this seven eleven by her house and bought about 12 packs of gum. Then we went back to her house and drew a picture of a gumball machine. We chewed ALL of the gum within the next two or three days, and whenever we were done we stuck the chewed gum inside the gumball machine. And we made sure to make it REALLY disgusting, and we like, chewed potato chips with the gum and stuff. Quite gross, really. Anyhoo, we resolved to send it to this girl Taylor, whom (Mrs. Chambers taught me how to correctly use who and whom) we really didn't like, because she had braces and all, and we turned it into this advertisement for the "ABC Gum Club", and it was really pretty nasty. We never ended up finishing the gumball, and it rotted before we sent it, which made it even more disgusting, and it therefore got thrown away. So I guess that really wasn't a seven eleven story, but what the hay.
Lol. Whoops. My bad. We didn't dislike her BECAUSE she had braces. I didn't mean to make it sound that way. We decided to SEND it to her because she had braces. That's what I really meant.
That's a nice 7-eleven story, and i fixed my tomorrow in the future ill be careful not to make the mistake again> watch i mispelt something in this comment
But other than that, all sounds pretty spiffy. And speaking of seven eleven stories... one time me and Katy (Roulston), back in the day when we were still best friends) walked up to this seven eleven by her house and bought about 12 packs of gum. Then we went back to her house and drew a picture of a gumball machine. We chewed ALL of the gum within the next two or three days, and whenever we were done we stuck the chewed gum inside the gumball machine. And we made sure to make it REALLY disgusting, and we like, chewed potato chips with the gum and stuff. Quite gross, really. Anyhoo, we resolved to send it to this girl Taylor, whom (Mrs. Chambers taught me how to correctly use who and whom) we really didn't like, because she had braces and all, and we turned it into this advertisement for the "ABC Gum Club", and it was really pretty nasty. We never ended up finishing the gumball, and it rotted before we sent it, which made it even more disgusting, and it therefore got thrown away. So I guess that really wasn't a seven eleven story, but what the hay.
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