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tifaching

Too Much To Handle

Apr 05, 2011 06:48

Story Title: Too Much To Handle
Character/Relationships:Dean, Sam
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Warnings: Character death
A/N: Written for the third round of ( Read more... )

dean, character death, sam, pg, hurt!sam, drabble

Comments 36

smilla02 April 5 2011, 11:51:44 UTC

Beautiful done!
*heartclench*

tifaching April 5 2011, 16:50:14 UTC

Thank you!

meus_venator April 5 2011, 11:58:44 UTC

lovely, lovely

'screams his brother’s name to a gray, indifferent sky'

paints such a dire picture in your mind.

tifaching April 5 2011, 16:52:50 UTC

I'm glad the picture came across. And it was dire and bleak. That moment in canon just called to me when I saw the prompt.

Thank you!

amberdreams April 5 2011, 12:46:41 UTC

I love bleak. And their lives didn't get much bleaker, not really, than this moment.

tifaching April 5 2011, 16:56:31 UTC

I love bleak too.

Thanks!

borgmama1of5 April 5 2011, 13:05:01 UTC

Exactly as it happened--breaks my heart!

tifaching April 5 2011, 16:57:11 UTC

I kind of didn't want to just write that moment, but it sure fit the prompt. Thank you!

keerawa April 5 2011, 13:34:01 UTC

Ouch. Yeah, that's our canon. Makes sense that, in this moment, Dean's mind would scrabble for a single detail to focus on. Well done, TIf.

tifaching April 5 2011, 16:58:15 UTC

Thanks!

Dean couldn't have been thinking too clearly right at that moment. I'm sure it took him at least a minute or two before he switched over to blaming himself for everything!