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tifaching

Missing Pieces

Jan 10, 2011 12:45

Title: Missing Pieces
Characters: Dean, Bobby, other canon character
Genre: Gen/AU in that a character long dead in canon is causing problems for Dean.
Rating: PG
Word count: 995
Summary: Someone else found Dean long before the djinn did in season 6/
A/N: For the prompt "a character finds a suspicious package" at spn_las

( “I’m out, Bobby. Who would be sending me this shit?” “Boy, I know you’re out, but a lot of people know who you are and a lot of things that ain’t people know who you are. You made a whole bunch of enemies on both sides of the fence in the last couple of years and if you don’t think any of them could find you … well, just tell me you haven’t gotten careless.” )

dean, gen, hurt!dean, bobby, pg

Comments 30

glenavera January 10 2011, 18:12:55 UTC

I like it! I really like it. What a wonderful story! I like Bobby so much and in one story with Dean it's just perfect.

tifaching January 10 2011, 19:08:39 UTC

Thanks!

amberdreams January 10 2011, 18:50:20 UTC

Wouldn't Dean question the fact that Gordon was back from the dead too? Am I confused or is this whole thing all in Dean's head?
Confusion aside - I liked it. Of course I am looking for good reasons to return Dean's amulet, I wonder if the show will ever do it...?

amberdreams January 10 2011, 18:52:43 UTC

Ignore me - I didn't read your preamble properly!! You said it was AU so Gordy didn't die - yup.

tifaching January 10 2011, 19:08:26 UTC

Nope, no dead vampy Gordons here. There is no genre in the las header, so I put in the warnings that it was non canon compliant because a dead character was causing problems for Dean.

I really liked the idea of Gordon sending Dean anonymous packages and then capturing him to get to Sam. I also like the idea that soulless!Sam just sold Dean's amulet because he felt no connection to it any more.

Glad you enjoyed, thanks so much!

amberdreams January 10 2011, 19:36:13 UTC

Yes I am sure if Gordon had survived (and not vamped out too obviously) he would have kept after the Winchesters and would have been batshit crazy enough to stalk Dean...

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tifaching January 11 2011, 02:59:02 UTC

Thanks BB! Wish the las voters had felt the same way.

Maybe it wasn't clear that Sam saved him? Because it really wasn't. I mean I hoped people would get that, but really I wanted to finish the fic with a Sam-Bobby phone call, but I just couldn't make it work.

Of course Sam was keeping an eye on Dean! He needed him for something that show was never clear about! LOL

And his soulless self would sell the amulet, to him it's just a piece of metal.

Glad you enjoyed!

spn_j2fan January 11 2011, 06:09:02 UTC

I suck! I totally suck! I have been so wrapped up in finishing a project that I didn't even read all the stories! And I really regret it. I have read them all, every single week, even when I skipped, but I think the break made me lazy.

I'm sorry. I got the story. I really did. It fit right in with the twisted beginnings of the sixth season. I liked the reentry of Gordon. Why not him? So many others have.

And Bobby's shady references to Sam would go over Dean's (newly domesticated) head, even if he still had a "tingle" of apprehension.

I am so sorry I didn't vote. I am a crappy, crappy "las voter" right now. *hanging my head in shame and heading for the showers*

Anyway. I liked the story, I had a feel for Dean's apprehension and Bobby's hesitance. It was good characterization and a great idea. I couldn't ask for more in under a thousand words.

tifaching January 11 2011, 12:45:53 UTC

LOL, don't sweat it. I didn't vote either and I DID read all the stories. If I'd voted I'd still be in, so don't beat yourself up.

Thanks, for the nice words, I liked this story! I love Gordon, he's so crazy that he's fun to write. I had in mind that it was AU, and that he never died, not that he came back, but that was probably kind of confusing.

Anyway, I had a much longer run then I thought I would and I didn't skip a single round, so I thought I'd be out long ago.
Thanks for all your support along the way!