Rising Waters

[tifaching]

“God fucking damn it.” The grimy lace curtain crackled aside as Dean peered out the window. The Impala was just visible in the premature dusk of a driving rainfall and he snarled his displeasure at the grey, dismal view.

“Not letting up?”

Considering that the pounding on the corrugated metal roof sounded like a herd of tap dancing buffalo, Dean didn’

Comments

[sleepypercy]

Ah, this fic is perfect in it's imperfection of Sam and Dean's lives. Because the boys will never be stable and open, but the somehow find ways to have their own moments and happiness.

And this hit me SO HARD Sam, saying "It’s just…I mean…we live our whole lives in those rooms, one after the other, all of them the same.... Don’t you ever just want to get away?”

Seriously, I was thinking it was so silly and stupid for Sam to make Dean chase him out in the rain, but this makes so much sense, and says so much about Sam. I just wanna analyze this perfection Sam characterization so much, I love it.

And, of course, hot Wincest done so well. ^_^

[majestic_duxk]

yes!~ that was the line that hit me too!

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and now I will stop comment jumping. It's hot, but it's also so bitter sweet and so them.

[tifaching]

Thank you! It just seemed so Sam!

[tifaching]

Ah, thank you! I have no idea where Sam running in the rain came from, but it had to be because he needed to get out of those damned rooms, Dean's charms on offer or not. :)

And I'm glad Sam came across as Sam. I just think that he'd be so desperate to get out especially when he was so close to making his escape.

[amberdreams]

Yay you finished! Poor Dean, always drowning...even after having hot wincesty sex. Sigh.

[tifaching]

I had absolutely nothing that wasn't dreck to post and this came together in a day with practically non-stop writing. It could be a lot better, but at least it's done. :)

LOL, at least he got some sexin' before Sam took off.

[ephermeralk]

Absolutely stunning, bb!! The line about dad seeing his other family practically killed me, and mmmm wet boys, and the super hot sex was amazing!

Congrats on finishing and happy new year!!

[tifaching]

Thanks! Ha, when Dean was coming up with outlandish places John could be that one just hit me right between the eye. :)

[somer]

I loved the way Sam bribed Dean! Very, very much. And of course this wouldn't work with the little slice of angst thrown into the mix. Loved it :)

[tifaching]

Sam knows Dean VERY well. And you know how I love my angst....

Thank you!

[gingersnap1224]

i really liked how bittersweet it felt. I could sense the emotional "storm" that was about to hit.
Nice job.

[tifaching]

Thank you! And yes, the biggest storm is still to come.