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trancer21 in tietuckluv

FIC: Watching [L&O SVU]

Mar 13, 2006 15:22

Title: Watching
Pairing: Elliot and Alex/Casey/Olivia/Warner
Genre: Fluffy PWP
Rating: Mature?
Word Count: 860
Summary: Elliot volunteers for a demonstration.

( He knows they’re watching )

by trancer21, elliot fic

Comments 12

lostingeekdom March 13 2006, 23:47:37 UTC

OMG!LOVE!

She would stare in professional bemusement. A lascivious detachment where there was no doubt as to what she was thinking. Hell, with Melinda, there was always the possibility of comment.

How do you keep coming up with stuff I love? I'm dangerously close to fangurling you now.

trancer21 March 15 2006, 01:58:38 UTC

How do I come up with this? Easy! I have no life!! As for fangurling me, well, I'd just wind up fangurling you back and we'd just wind up cancelling each other out or, you know, collapsing the universe, one or the other, or something.

lostingeekdom March 16 2006, 04:46:13 UTC

I'd go more with the collaping universe (or is it expanding) option, 'cos this mutual fangurling could get quite combustible.

OMG... badtyler March 14 2006, 05:14:57 UTC

"You are such an only child!"

Perfect. I'm guessing it was Casey who wanted to draw straws.

Re: OMG... trancer21 March 15 2006, 02:00:16 UTC

Hee, yeah, that was Casey. But the good news is, she finally got to go on the Stabler Ride...and keep all her quarters!

Re: OMG... badtyler March 15 2006, 05:00:30 UTC

I'll bet Casey enjoyed the ride, too.
Mind if I flist you? My admiration for your oh-so-apt Elliot fics
knows no bounds.

I promise not be a pest, nor a Nosy Parker.

Re: OMG... trancer21 March 15 2006, 13:15:56 UTC

Flist away, I'm all about expanding my flist!

Thread 5

theholyinnocent March 14 2006, 15:55:43 UTC

Bwah! Much love for this.

trancer21 March 15 2006, 02:00:58 UTC

Thank you, it was fun to write. Everyone should have the opportunity to have a Stabler tied to their bed at least once in their lives.

ultraviolet730 March 14 2006, 21:52:09 UTC

My icon sums up my reaction to this fic. Plus, it's kind of like an illustration for the story! If, you know, they were recreating the crime in a prison.

The insights for all four were wonderful:

Melinda - loved the reference to the way she is always using Elliot as a prop, so she can touch him!
Casey - oh so confused and easy to read. Poor baby.
Olivia - "Anger. Resentment. Jealousy." Perfect summation and explanation for each one.
Alex - that description of her left me a little breathless.

Loved the idea that he'd thought about going commando, and that Alex actually had. And poor petulant Olivia, sulking while Alex and Elliot have all the fun, as Melinda observes and Casey tries to figure out what that strange feeling in the room is. (Never having generated sexual tension with anyone, it would obviously add to her confusion.)

It's just so great to see Alex and Elliot playing each other, with an audience, no less. They are both exhibitionists, in their own ways. I love it.

“Without,” Elliot grinned, jutting his hips ( ... )

trancer21 March 15 2006, 02:22:06 UTC

This would make such a great video. And NBC would finally have a runaway hit on its hands. And knees...

Hee, Dick Wolf should spin-off his franchise to HBO or Cinemax or something - Law & Order: NC-17!! We add the extra Chung! to the Chung!