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Brigit's Flame -- "Reap"

Apr 26, 2009 13:21

Prompt: "reap"
Word Count: 2,648
Warnings: language, vague blasphemy, fantasy violence, a bit of gore
Author's Note: The people asked for a more personalized mythos for Vincent the Snarky French Vampire (his stage name), and this time I was struck with the inspiration to deliver. Some of this I made up when originally conceiving of the character a ( Read more... )

[length] 3k, [genre] adventure, [genre] humor, [genre] fantasy, [rating] pg-13, [year] 2009, [original] brigit's flame, [character - original] vincent duval, [character - original] maion

Comments 17

richelle2972 April 26 2009, 21:55:31 UTC

Vincent always makes my day. : ) I love him a little too much, methinks.

"Vincent wanted to know exactly whence the motherfucker had acquired a battleaxe."
Hahaha I love the way he talks. It's very old-English sounding, but the curseword is definitely more modern. ; )

tierfal April 27 2009, 02:20:55 UTC

It is not possible to love Vincent too much! \o/

Unless you're me, in which case you're up until two finishing this. :P

One of my favorite lines. 8D

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tierfal April 28 2009, 00:27:27 UTC

*bounces madly*

It's the hair. God damn the hair. XD

Maion: Really, now, was that necessary?

It's Milton, it is. XD /infected

Bahaha. XD You know, I originally had something awkward with "where/from," and I mostly just changed it for the convenience, then ended up liking it better? XD

alabasterfalcon April 27 2009, 15:56:31 UTC

This.

This is awesome. I have no more words. Glad to see Vincent is a recurring character.

tierfal April 28 2009, 00:44:39 UTC

Thanks! 8D I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

Vincent is... if I told him to go away, he wouldn't listen, so that's pretty much that. XD

mistvieh April 27 2009, 20:39:22 UTC

I'm a sucker for recurring characters also, as I am a perpetrator of such things (some people call it lazy, I call it dedicated, haha!).

You have a real talent for dialogue! I would have been content to read a piece devoted entirely to a witty banter between Vincent and Maion. How dare those zombies interrupt their conversation? Scoff!

I'll leave it to an editor to subject you to any negative criticism; I haven't the energy (or the heart) to nitpick you, so someone else can be the bad guy. ;-) Heehee. Very well done.

tierfal April 28 2009, 00:59:16 UTC

Vincent is my go-to guy for "Oh, hell, will you take a look at that prompt?!" XD

Thanks!! ^^ It's easily my favorite thing, I think. Sometimes I put two characters in a room and can't get them to shut up for the life of me. XD

Glad you enjoyed it! :D

kenderlord April 27 2009, 22:08:04 UTC

THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY.

That is all.
-D

tierfal April 28 2009, 01:02:09 UTC

Haha, I AM GLAD TO HEAR IT. 8D