DN -- Caveat Emptor III: Human Contact

[tierfal]

Title: Caveat Emptor
Chapter: 3. Human Contact
Fandom: Death Note
Pairing: L/Light
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,955
Prompt: "dark"
Warnings: don't even get me started! XD
Summary: In which there are shopping trips, sarcasm, backhanded compliments, dark rooms, big guns, bubble baths, trauma of every sort, and detailed fantasies involving cake - lots

Comments

[passthebutter]

“I don’t think you need to worry too much, Light-kun,” L told him. “I daydream about cake with some consistency.”

I lol'd so hard at this.

And then the last part, and the strawberries... I wanted to cry from the cuteness. It was so real, so vivid, like I could really imagine people talking like that to each other. I am loving this series so much! There's so much more at stake now... Now that they've both admitted that they love each other, they're going to fight for each other... God, I hope they do. Bring on the next chapter!!! <3

[tierfal]

I should write an L cake fantasy sometime. Oh, yes. XD

Oh my goodness, thank you, darling!! ^^;; I feel like someone's confessing everlasting love in practically everything I write, and I have to take it from a different angle every time. XD Dancing with glee that you liked this one! ^^

Next chapter Monday! 8D ...which is... Tuesday for your portion of the world, I believe? XD

[passthebutter]

I feel like I have to phrase it a different way every time I comment even though I basically always say the same thing: "ASDFGHJKL I LOVE YOU." LOL

Yup! So I'll have House and this to look forward to! 8DD

[tierfal]

Oh, man, don't I know THAT feeling! XD You're doing a pretty epic-amazing job so far, if I may say. 8D

SWEET! Don't mind my pretty absurd jealousy. :P

[richelle2972]

OMG absolutely amazing. I love the way that L admits he's in love with Light. It's very L-like. *sigh*

[tierfal]

I looooove writing L. ^^ He just has a way of saying things that's so much fun to play with. :D

I'm sooooooo happy you're enjoying it. 8D

[annakas]

I really really really like the glimpse in to Lights head. Ohh and it's awesome how he knows he is losing it and the previous hold of captivtity by L has left it's mark.

Lol L's reaction to Light having Cake daydreams was hilarious.

And it was such a heartwarming confession that both did about their feelings.

I am still so afraid to read every new chapter. What will the bad guys do to them? They can't break L and Light!

annakas

[tierfal]

I wish I'd played up the parallels to the previous captivity more, actually! Such an opportunity to fiddle with poor Light's psyche even further. XD Ah, well. XD

I'm glad also that you liked the confession -- it's always tricky to play those to be sweet but not cheesy. ^^