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Brigit's Flame -- "Harmony"

Feb 20, 2009 02:47

Prompt: "harmony"
Word Count: 1,117
Warnings: mild language
Author's Note: eltea rocks my world with her editing skills. ♥ It rained like crazy last week, hence... XD

( Rain. Again. )

[rating] pg, [year] 2009, [original] brigit's flame, [length] 1k, [genre] general, [genre] friendship

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taste_is_sweet February 21 2009, 05:19:58 UTC

Man, I think this is the best thing you've written to date. At least it's the best thing of yours I've read. I freaking loved this. It actually reminded me of my "Pape and Danforth" stuff, which I hope you don't mind. It's the atmosphere and dialogue. Your descriptions are far more eloquent. :)

And let me say that this: He loves Todd. Or he’s in love with him. Made me go \o/ big time. :) I know, I'm terrible for looking for slash all over the place, but the story felt like it was leading up to that sentence from just about when Todd got Micah a bag for his shoes. In other words, that was an expected and satisfying conclusion. Well done.

(On a totally different topic, what I don't love, I'm afraid, is how teeny-tiny the font is for leaving comments. It's really hard for me to read what I'm typing.)

tierfal February 21 2009, 08:00:54 UTC

Oh, you are slaying me with kindness! XD It just makes me so, so crazily happy when the ones that have the most bits and pieces of me are well-received. :) (I should go check out "Pape and Danforth," shouldn't I?? ^^)

HA! ...er, I mean, slash is not everywhere. In fact, it's nowhere. Nowhere at all. Clearly. Um. :P These are not the Microsoft Word documents you're looking for. XD

(Damn, you too? D: jenwryn was mentioning that to me, but it looks fine on my computer, and I'm not sure how to fix it... I'll definitely poke around the options and see if I can figure anything out. Thanks for letting me know!)

taste_is_sweet February 21 2009, 15:50:27 UTC

You don't read my brigits_flame entries?

I didn't know that, and to be honest it makes me sad. I look forward to your contributions to the contest every round and I thought that I was able to share my fiction with you in return.

tierfal February 22 2009, 09:44:39 UTC

I'm sorry, I didn't mean to offend! Sadly, I'm not a particularly active part of the comm -- I have something of a full-time life, and using my time to write for myself is really the only thing that keeps me together. The pieces for B_F have kind of become my way of unpacking the week at some ungodly hour Thursday night, but I honestly don't have time to give all the entries the attention they deserve. When I get a chance, I try to read a couple thoroughly and leave thoughtful comments, but it's just not something I can commit to doing every time. :(

taste_is_sweet February 23 2009, 18:57:34 UTC

Please don't worry about having offended me, because you did not. I'm sorry that you don't have time to be more active with the comm in general, but I can certainly understand being so busy. I'm glad you're able to have time to write at all. And please don't feel obliged to read anything of mine. If you want to, that'd be very nice. But it's okay if you don't.

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