Brigit's Flame -- "Beat"

[tierfal]

Prompt: "beat"
Word Count: 909
Warnings: meh, little bit of language?
Author's Note: It is the hour of night when I hate everything. I need to learn how normal people deal with deadlines. Thanks as always to the inimitable eltea. :) Oh, yeah, and... Vincent the First and Vincent the Second. Meet Eddikins.

Comments

[richelle2972]

Vincent is the coolest. And I love Edward! : ) Way to use the name that is slowly becoming attached with Twilight and use it for a werewolf. ; )

[tierfal]

I heart Vincent, truly. :P

I actually made up Edward before Twilight was very big, sadly. XD I think though, that the name was part of what doomed him in the RP for which he was born... XD

[____hejira]

I really like this! Great job. Congrats on the January win too! My only suggestion is to switch the last two lines around, maybe removing the also from the line about the clothes. It's pretty entertaining when you switch them. Just a thought. Good luck.

[tierfal]

Thank you, thank you, thank you! ^^

[taste_is_sweet]

That was fun. :)

I was a little confused at first, though--I thought Sirius might be another person, and I thought they were actually in a car--but once I got further into the story, it all came clear enough and was very enjoyable. I like your characters very much, and especially how Edward managed to surprise Vincent, smug undead bastard. ::g::

[tierfal]

lol, my bad about Sirius. For some reason, I have this thing for talking about the sky, only I don't know very many stars. :P

Vincent was totally asking for it. 8D Glad you enjoyed; thanks! ^^