DN -- Shades of White VI: Ghosts

Jan 15, 2009 14:42

Title: Shades of White
Chapter: 6. Ghosts
Fandom: Death Note
Character: Near
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,023
Warnings: none
Summary: The mind is a sanctum; the heart is a wasteland -- Near, in six
moments. Six: It was quiet in the small cemetery.
Author's Note: This one was written... a million years ago, but I was never sure if I liked it. It was ( Read more... )

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nialyjoy January 15 2009, 23:36:26 UTC
GJkgfsjafk

You know how much I love this story. Near is just... oh god, you just managed to capture him perfectly. He's cold and and he can be ruthless but he's also so human. This chapter broke my heart for him and then I wanted to cry at the end because the last line was so beautiful ;_;

He couldn’t remember the last time he had done that. It had been cathartic, somehow-cleansing, and wracking, and pure. As the salt had dried in crusty trails on his cheeks and his rippling, gasping breaths had slowly evened out, he had reconciled with it, at least a little. Because even in a world where Kira could reign, even in a world where L could die, there was enough justice left to let Matt and Mello go out at the same time.

That, at least, was kind.

I am such a hopeless Matt/Mello fangirl XD

Again, lovelovelove :D

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tierfal January 16 2009, 00:18:19 UTC
*scuffs foot happily* Thank you!! XD

I had a really interesting time trying to get into Near's socks, and I'm super-glad that you enjoyed my odd little trip. ^^

Matt/Mello for the WIN! 8D

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