FMA -- Unwound

[tierfal]

Title: Unwound
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Roy/Ed, Ed/Hei
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,040
Warnings: language, aaaaaaangst, major SPOILERS for '03/CoS
Prompt: Neon is the birthday girl~
Summary: When the wind stirs, human beings tangle together, and it's hell to pry them loose.
Author's Note: For Neon's birthday! ♥ …uh, late! ♥ …and I know

Comments

[paranormalpanda]

I DON'T KNOW WHAT MY FEELINGS ARE DOING. I'm happy for Roy/Ed but also really sad for Alfons ;___; He gets second choice when compared to Al AND Roy, his whole world and everything he loves is Ed's second choice (and Hei/Ed is my second favourite pairing...oh god I'm sorry Alfons waaah) YOU DESERVE TO BE SOMEONE'S FIRST CHOICE, HEI BB.

Forgetting my Hei feels for a sec, the Roy/Ed parts were really awesome! (especially the almost gettin' it on in the office part c:) And I'm glad there was a hopeful ending, I don't think my heart would have survived a sad one ;A;

[kushinas]

I am not even joking, literally a few hours ago I was talking about how either royed or edhei was the most tragic couple in this stupid series and then you posted this on your tumblr and I was like 'figures the universe would do this to me as if I didn't get punched in the stomach enough'.

Freaking hell, Alfons. *breaks down and cries* Like with Roy I can be happy with the idea that, you know, hey, Ed loves him but with Alfons - ugh, everything sucks.

Your fic sucks and it hurt me but I loved everything about it especially these parts:

"He’s not a man anymore-he’s a wildfire contained in flesh. Wildfire has no feelings; wildfire has no will. Wildfire has neither restraint nor control. When the wind drives him, he flows

[bob_fish]

Oh, heartbreaking. <3 Poor old Alfons. Poor everyone. But I love that there's banter in between and it ends on a note of hope and determination.

Also, scrambling eggs in the bacon pan = excellent decision. You just know Al would make himself into a great cook.

[dragonimp]

Very lyrical fic. And heartbreaking. And of course I like the hopeful note at the end.

[karasuya]

That was so fucking heartbreaking when i realized Ed was ibly dreaming, it took my breath away. The opening was worded so beautufully and the desire just builds from there. "What Roy wouldn’t give to find out how damnation tastes-" I love this line so much damn much! I reeeeeeally want to know what would happens next! But I guess I will have to leave it up to my imagination, unless you decide to continue the story future, which would be marvelous!