FMA -- Leading the Blind VI: An Eye for an Eye

[tierfal]

Title: Leading the Blind
Chapter: 6. An Eye for an Eye
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Roy/Ed, with bonus Havoc/Rebecca, Hawkeye/Awesome, and Al/Cats
Rating: R
Word Count: 4,646
Warnings: language, MAJOR spoilers for Brotherhood, blind jokes are not very PC are they, eventual explicit sex
Summary: Roy adjusts to a life of legal blindness, and

Comments

[hiza_chan]

“Of course I have! Ling and Greed traded off paragraphs explaining things before they tore my pants off and demonstrated.” How did you know that Ling(Greed)/Ed is one of the biggest contenders against my Roy/Ed and Al/Ed OTPs? BECAUSE OH MY GOD, THAT SENTENCE. I SQUEAKED.

Also, I love this. But you knew that already.

[tierfal]

IT'S EVERYBODY'S OTHER-OTHER OTP, TRUE STORY. If you haven't read bob_fish's and enemytosleep's Camping Trip of Doom series, really do, because it's pretty much composed of Greeling/Ed pr0nz. :D

I LOVE YOUUUUUU ♥

[amethyst_koneko]

IT'S EVERYBODY'S OTHER-OTHER OTP, TRUE STORY.

O rly. Allow me then to introduce myself as (apparently) the one and only fangirl in this fandom who is so not into this pairing. Long story short, I've never been able to pin down precisely what it is about Ling that is so offputting to me but it's there nonetheless and has been since the moment I laid eyes on him. :/

[tierfal]

Awww, that's too bad - I love me some Ling. \o/ To each their own, I suppose! :)

[ca_te]

Wow, bb! I'm taken aback by how well you portray their emotions in this piece, both Ed's and Roy's, their longing and also their uncertainty. This is really perfect! <3

(also, I took this new icon so that I could comment properly on your FMA fics X3)

[tierfal]

jflsjakfldjaklfjsalaaaaa, baby, you're too sweeeeeeeet. ♥ I'm so glad you're having such a good time with it! :3

(EXCELLENT CHOICE; IT'S GORGEOUS! :DDDDD)

[tyndall_blue]

I want you to know, reading this today while trapped at work by hurricane Isaac really brightened my day. You're on a roll! Don't stop!

[tierfal]

OMG, honey! Stay safe!! *clings* o_____o

And jafjklsajl don't you worry on that account; the last chapter is 8,000 words, and I'm going to post it as soon as I've caught up with the F-list. X'D

*hugs more* ♥

[bob_fish]

Another lovely chapter! Things I loved:

- Ed's awful, hilarous hangover and Roy's unobtrusive kindness
- the tachi being amazing and giving each other shit endlessly.
- Roy getting licked awake by Hitomi.
- Camping Trip of Doom mention \o/
- Ed's badass confrontation with the thug, and his thoughts on why, despite the brief red haze, it isn't in him to kill.
- poor Ed, so resistant to just saying "fuck it" and going for it, despite the risks of making himself vulnerable

Also, No sex in front of the cats, unless you want to pay to send them to therapy. Al is deluding himself. Cats like to watch. O_o

[tierfal]

There seems to be a rule in my head somewhere that if I'm writing a Roy/Ed fic over 10K, Ed has to throw up. Jesus, Ed, I'm so sorry, baby. XD''''''

I think Camping Trip of Doom has basically replaced the actual show as far as the canon that exists in my head. 8D

Cats like to watch. O_o
…I almost died.

…I totally believe it. X'D

Al's problem is that he's confusing "cats" and "children". XDDDDD