Original -- The Burning Ones
Title: The Burning Ones
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,819
Warnings: language, relatively mild violence with flaming swords
Prompt: The Pretender at pulped_fictions
Summary: The Archangel Michael catches up.
Author's Note: Since finishing FMA, every time I sit down to write, it's like, "This needs more swords! And more guns! And more magic!", which is sabotaging ( Read more... )
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,819
Warnings: language, relatively mild violence with flaming swords
Prompt: The Pretender at pulped_fictions
Summary: The Archangel Michael catches up.
Author's Note: Since finishing FMA, every time I sit down to write, it's like, "This needs more swords! And more guns! And more magic!", which is sabotaging ( Read more... )
I would probably have to jump off of a bridge if I killed Maion. XD'' That said, I'm really glad that the threat seemed real to you, because… well, hell, that's what should happen in a fight scene? Evidently I have no idea what I'm talking about, so it's a miracle I managed to string 3,000 words together for this in the first place. XDDDDD
I'm almost always REALLY insecure about my action scenes - like, dialogue? Sure. Extensive emotional inner monologue? Done deal. Action? AAAAAH XD - so I'm even more excessively pleased to hear that it worked for you in that regard. c:
D'awwwww, *pets you forever* Tragically the novel is sort of wandering around dimly-lit corridors of my mind and muttering to itself at the moment; I've been waylaid constantly by Winterval diversions and stuff I have to write for class. And, y'know, minor emotional breakdowns and whatnot. *coughs* But I have to finish Chapter 9 by the end of this month, or I don't get points for my Winterval team, so that should help, and I'm almost done with a few lingering FMA fic plot bunnies, and… well, I have half a dozen more excuses if you want them. :P
MORE IMPORTANTLY, hey, you, thanks so much. ♥
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