fic: Wrong Kind Of Guy - Part Three [PG-13]

[tielan]

TITLE: Wrong Kind Of Guy - Part Three
AUTHOR: Tielan
SUMMARY: She had time for a squeak before he had her down on the grass, straddling her with one hand planted just below her throat. "You'd prefer I behaved like this?"
CATEGORY: crackfic, shermer_high AU
RATING: PG-13
NOTES: 31,000 words and still another few scenes to go. Eep! I'm hoping to finish the story

Comments

[akimi_hime]

Hee! I like Ronon's constant amusement with her, and how she knows she's gonna get the third degree. Keep 'em coming!

[duskyfox]

Oh this is such fun. I like your characterization of Ronon, and your Elizabeth is very believable, and very much like the Elizabeth on the show. I also love your mentions of Rodney
because Rodney was almost incapable of keeping secrets since his mind didn't work in the same timezone as anything else that happened around him.

yeah, that sounds like young Rodney.

I also like that you're writing Elizabeth's parents and making her mom do something like actual parenting instead of just throwing them off into the background somewhere.

You have a really good set-up here, and I can't wait to see where you go with it.

[sugargroupie]

This is so much fun, and I love that you aren't skirting around the differences between them, and that he called her on her privilege. Exactly. *nods*

[roothekittykat]

hee! isn't high school wonderful? LoL :)

[ship_recs]

This is so much fun! Can't wait to read more.