Understanding [11/?]

[neshel]

Title: Understanding [11/?] - The Plan
Rating: NC-17 overall

Pairing/Characters: Mohinder/Sylar, Ensemble

Spoilers: Seasons 1 & 2, and some of the online comics.
Warnings: Some possibly, vaguely disturbing imagery surrounding being buried alive. A little language, vague references to past m/m sex and murderous intentions. Nothing major.

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Comments

[kael_raye]

When I saw this updated I Squee'd!!! :D

Heeheehee! I really liked the Bennet/Mohinder/Peter interaction in this. Mohinder trying to control his thoughts and the conversation so he doesn't get caught lying was very well done. ^_^

'Mohinder sprawled hap hazardously across the bed, his hair disheveled, the tear in his soft lower lip just beginning to heal. Bruises in the very first stages of formation mapping out the places that Sylar had been, the territory he had explored and claimed for his own.' <--*droolz* such pretty imagery, Sylar's so lucky XD

And Oh! Adam's back and now I'm curious as to what exactly's happening there and you just had to end it. XD *sits on edge of seat* I want more!

[neshel]

awww, yay!

Heeheehee! I really liked the Bennet/Mohinder/Peter interaction in this. Mohinder trying to control his thoughts and the conversation so he doesn't get caught lying was very well done. ^_^
So glad to hear that, because all that dialog nearly killed me. The Bennet/Mohinder at the beginning was the worst.

*droolz* such pretty imagery, Sylar's so lucky XD
mmmm, yes he is

And Oh! Adam's back and now I'm curious as to what exactly's happening there and you just had to end it. XD *sits on edge of seat* I want more!
I have this nasty habit of ending things on cliffhangers, or as close to as I can manage. Oddly, half the time its not even on purpose! XD So, sorry, I am innately evil that way.

^_^ Hopefully the next part won't take as long. Dinner is either gonna be a lot of fun to write, or very, very painful.

[mabetini]

YAY I love this chapter!

Sylar's little recollection of Mohinder on the plane was my favorite part XD

God I'm such a Mylar whore!

But I'm quite excited to see Sylar meet up with Adam...I do hope that ends well. He could put that ability to good use and kidnap Mohinder and keep him forever and...

I have issues.

Wonderful job!

[neshel]

Yay! Thank you!

God I'm such a Mylar whore!
Oh but its so worth it!

But I'm quite excited to see Sylar meet up with Adam...I do hope that ends well. He could put that ability to good use and kidnap Mohinder and keep him forever and... I have issues.
lol! omg, if you have issues then so do I, so its all good. *giggles* Just can't help the dirty thoughts when it comes to those two.

[teecub]

Woohoo! This chapter was awesome! Mohinder dealt with Bennet well. I especially love his uncertainty over everything, and the conflicting feelings he has over Sylar. As for Sylar himself - hehehe! He STOLE Mohinder's satchel! That's pretty cute, actually. I love how you write him. Heck, I love how you write them all. They are all so in character! <3

[neshel]

*giggles* awww, thank you so much!

[poemwithnorhyme]

I concur with kael_raye, I squee'd so very badly, XD! And I'm supposed to be at school right now but I decided to skip because I'm a bad girl. (Actually I missed the bus and didn't have a ride to school, but anywaysss..O.o

[neshel]

I concur with kael_raye, I squee'd so very badly, XD!
*blushes happily*

This was just a great chapter, as always! The little things you include, such as Sylar taking Mohinder's satchel, is just so creative and wonderful! Keeps everything so interesting! And Mohinder, I LOVE him in this, he's so well in character! And he's so difficult when it comes to characterization so *applauds you and bows* ^_^
Awwww... thank you!! I don't know why, but Mohinder comes pretty easily to me. I think its probably because we have a lot of personality traits in common, but I dunno... I could write Mohinder angst all day long. XD

I keep expecting Peter to be like "Bitch, I can read your mind! You little whore!" or something..at least confront him, but that's just me. Maybe the hickey will cause a confrontation...Mm..Hickey. XD
*giggles* I wonder how long Mohinder can get away with wearing a turtle-neck in the spring? ^_~

Sylar going after Hiro..*squee* I'm so happy...and wouldn't Adam go after him to? So ha, they meet up "He's mine.." "No, he's

[aurilly]

I love a good plot, so I loved this. And it's great, because the whole thing was so interesting, and then I was like, "Oh! Right. Adam!" Love. I love Mohinder, who is so in character here, and am so excited for Adam to be out of the box. Thanks for writing this.

[neshel]

Thank you for reading and commenting! It really means a lot to me. ^_^