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Brain Storm

Sep 10, 2008 11:42

Title: Brain Storm
Fandom: Dr. Horrible
Paring: Billy/Penny
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Big Ones!
Warnings: none
Word Count: 560
Summary: The voice in his head sounds just like Penny; sweet and harsh all at the same time.

Notes: Just a little something that popped into my head this morning and wouldn't leave me alone. Concrit is appreciated, as ( Read more... )

fandom: dr horrible, character: penny, character: billy

Comments 20

widestance75 September 10 2008, 21:29:53 UTC

Aw, this was sweet. How sweet and sad that Billy uses Penny to brainstorm. It made me sigh.

Love!

neshel September 11 2008, 12:27:31 UTC

yay! =) I'm extra glad you liked it since, unless I find some comm to post this to, looks like you're my only reader.

So I've heard people say (and I sorta agree) that Penny was basically the representation of Billy's soul. So I don't think it's a big leap for her voice to be the voice of good/hope inside his poor little head.

widestance75 September 11 2008, 14:34:49 UTC

Yay! It's mine, all mine!

I loved Dr. Horrible but haven't looked into the fandom or read theories and what not. But that really makes sense. And I just love how you portrayed Penny as his conscience. It was lovely.

Love!

neshel September 11 2008, 14:39:01 UTC

All for you. =)

I haven't really gotten into the fandom, but I think it was on entangled_now's LJ that I was reading her response to the show and some of the comments where this theory/analysis was chucked out.

snowpuppies December 23 2008, 16:28:05 UTC

Oh, this is very interesting.

I love the brainstorming concept and Penny's voice - so tragic.

neshel January 13 2009, 17:09:45 UTC

Thank you!

idioticonion December 23 2008, 16:33:59 UTC

I like it - poignant and with a writing style works really well. You make a lot of valid points and yet you still manage to be poetic.

Lovely. :)

neshel January 13 2009, 17:12:28 UTC

I like trying new things, every now and then. ^_~

Thank you!

cesnarose December 24 2008, 19:38:58 UTC

D8 I need you to write more. RIGHT. NOW. T_T

neshel January 13 2009, 17:14:18 UTC

Awww, I'm sorry, there is no more. Lots of Heroes fanfiction here, but I think this might be my only attempt at this fandom. Then again, you never know when the plotbunnies will bite.

Good! anonymous January 3 2009, 16:00:24 UTC

One bad word I didn't like, but very good. Optimistic, differing from its hopeless-feeling beginning. Very nice! Thanks for writing!

-Donteatacowman

Re: Good! neshel January 13 2009, 17:19:26 UTC

Optimism is always nice. =) Thank you!