[FIC] You and Me - Chapter II

[thylaslain]

You and Me

Overall rating: R - NC-17

Summary: Uchiha Sasuke has returned to Konohagakure. He's changed of course. But so has everything else...

SPOILERS: Up to current in Anime (i.e. Episode 135).
Chapter 2/?
Pairing: Uchiha Sasuke x Uzumaki Naruto Others may be mentioned
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Naruto and all related characters (c)

Comments

[thexsadist]

Kuuuuso~!!
Why was I not first. nyaaabecauseTracywasgonesince11to3?. Oh well--at least I'm here now :3 Nyaaa-I really never tire of your writing, it makes me feel as if there's some non-existant narrator is just echoing the words in my ear than my eyes just following the words. You did a really splendid job of catching attention in the first few lines, and this has to be one of my favorites--because for some reason it clung onto me: The taste of blood and tears were sour at the back of his throat. I love the description and emotion that you portray back at the manor--it just radiates the idea that Sasuke is probably thinking 'This used to be home...?' And then the whole photograph thing just had me melting. Half pity--half mushy

[thylaslain]

it was short? yeah. it was GOING to be 5 pages long. but then i cut it in half and continued the rest in chapter 3. n_n ah, Tra-sama, your reviews always make me giddy and HAPPY as hell.

ooh ficlet? meaning MORE?!
YESHHHHHHHHH *does the happydance*

if i wasn't writing such a stupidly angsty (teh angst is making my head implode) fic, i swears, i'd be poking SO much fun at Sasuke. and make orochimaru rape him several times over.

eeeeeeeeeeeeewwweeeeeeee.
ok. i don't hate the teme THAT much.
Like I said before (dunno if i've said it to you already), i hate the teme, UNLESS he's with naru-chan. see how naru-chan redeems people? he's just like that. n_n

I thinks Neji and co. are about to save him. can't WAIT for chap 262. but, yeah. I thinks Neji and co. are saving him. although, it might be too late. ::cries::

OH THE ANGUISH!

the pAIN!

[thexsadist]

;__; -cries tears of joooooy-
I'm happy that I make such a sexxxyimpact ;D Nyaaa-it's still good, does this mean we'll have a longer chapter 3?

LOL-oh my poor heart...err...maybe..maybe poor Sasuke. It's going to be a ficlet-yessums :O Angst-loaded with possible smut~! I do hope someone saves him. GOGOPOWERRANGERS! XD Or ...or...you know...Neji and company -sniffs-

[thylaslain]

oh Gosh, i remember the Power Rangers.

used to be addicted.
SO wanted to be the yellow ranger. Trini. yeah.
I still remember the original five.
Billy, Jason (who was mighty cute btw...), Kimberly, Trini and...Zack.
Zack, yeah?
then that tommy dude came. and the whole love fest started.
*memorieeeeeeeeeeeees*

[thexsadist]

BUT NO ONE REMEMBERS THE BLACK DUDE.
Lmao XDD I believe it was the pink ranger who was asian? :O Because it'd be mighty suspicious if you gave us yellow lmao. Well, right now, I'm the sasunaru ranger~!!

GO GO YAOI-ER-RANGERS! XDD

[thylaslain]

no. Trini (asian) was yellow. Kimberly was the pink one.

Zack's the black ranger.
...
whoa.
that was politically incorrect...

but u know what i mean. black ranger as in, black ranger.

...
i see a PATTERN here...asian...yellow...hm...