Hmm. Well. Yesterday was quite fun. And hopefully today will be too... I'm going down to St. Charles to go mini-golfing and, I'm sure, have fun at the Community Center (ahh, long story.) Plus, we're probably going to walk over to Townhouse Books, the most awesome bookstore ever, and also one of the two bookstores that really jump started my idea of
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I'm happy to see you're moving along so quickly. : ) I guess you've found your muse, whatever it is. I really liked how her goal of college is to find herself, wherever she ends up going. It's more realistic than winning the Nobel prize. Overall, the story is realistic, like it could happen anywhere. And I've always favored honesty over lying - you'll only be able to tell if I didn't like something if it sounds like I'm fishing around for any shred of something nice to say. And I'm not here. You're a good writer. You've got the pulse. *cue dramatic music* It's entertaining, and to me that means a lot. And I connect with the characters, and as characters are usually what makes or breaks a story for me, that is a very good thing.
It's weird to read something in such small snippets...I'm like "what?!" when I get to a spot and realize that the page won't go down any further because it's done. Keep writing! I'd love to read more! Hmm...I may have to dump my own story on you sometime and see what you think...we'll see.
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