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woffproff in thursday100plus

For The Trust Challenge

Jun 20, 2007 20:10

And for Bast2 in hopes she's feeling better soon. Hope this brings at least a chuckle, m'dear!

And I have to give a major shout-out to Daf9 for the 'choose your own adventure' idea.

Mothership Old School, Mike and Lennie, just under 1000 words.

( Trust Poisoning )

Comments 13

officerjudy June 21 2007, 02:25:05 UTC

I love both endings! You have Lennie and Mike absolutely NAILED, but I believe I've said that before. : )

woffproff June 21 2007, 13:23:41 UTC

Thank you. I honestly couldn't decide how to end it---I'm so glad Daf came up with her idea for me to steal!

Is me or what anonymous June 21 2007, 03:12:33 UTC

Is me or what but does Lennie sound like Jewish mother or Italian mother to Mike Logan ROFL

Re: Is me or what woffproff June 21 2007, 13:24:42 UTC

I'll agree---Lennie does sound like a bit of a mother hen. Ha!

animaltalker June 21 2007, 03:52:13 UTC

I love it and hey to anonymous, Lennie was half Jewish

woffproff June 21 2007, 13:29:45 UTC

Thanks, AT---And Mike had such a bad mom, so I guess he'd take what mothering he could get. :) You know, the more I think about it, there are some scenes where I'm not sure if Lennie is maternal/paternal/or just holding the leash, but he seems to have a sort of control over Mike. Or, at least, that's my interpretation of it. Of course, I also think he enjoyed watching Mike beat the crap out of people, so I may be a little cracked in the head!

You know, I wish they'd get all the seasons out on DVD so I could watch them more thoroughly. I really would like to write more with Lennie with Rey and Ed!

Oh, sorry, not sure why this comment turned into a discussion!

I forgot about that part animaltalker June 21 2007, 23:26:08 UTC

OH YEAH I forgot Lennie was Half jewish I agree I think Lennie has some control over Mike than all Logan was partner with

I think he enjoy Mikey go at with perp

He hold his leash

Now Ed Green what did Lennie said to lawyer SORRY he bite through all dog leashes ROFL

mccoylover June 21 2007, 04:37:42 UTC

I like both, but the last ending is my favorite - it catches the playfulness between Mike and Lennie very well. Great read!

woffproff June 21 2007, 13:31:31 UTC

Thanks---I completely stole the idea from MAYHEM (which is one of my all-time favorite episodes), where the guys tease Mike about the food he's eating and he grouses to Lennie, "You had to tell them!"

tudorlady June 22 2007, 04:44:45 UTC

I think I love you. You SO have them nailed. Not to mention, I could *see* Mike's place, vaguely greasy sofa, newspaper on the floor and all.

Just one thing. He's a Yankees fan ;)

Still working on your translation. Who knew it could be so complicated??
xoxox

woffproff June 22 2007, 12:11:22 UTC

Oops, I forgot he was the Yankees fan---I always get mixed who up pulls for who! (Maybe Lennie gave it to him as a joke :) Put it this way, after this day, it'll probably be history.

Thanks again for the work on the translation. I just hate that I've put you to such trouble!