Challenge Response

[mccoylover]

Notes: I got really carried a way on this. It is a continuation of a challenge from the l & o 100. It's  waaaaaaay over 100! I thought it might fit here, but it sort of took a direction of it's own -so sorry in advance for my digression. It's still not done - I'll decide whether it's worth the effort, based on the response Iget from you all.
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[animaltalker]

I like it

[mccoylover]

Thanks!

[officerjudy]

Very nice. I love this line:

Where'd they go for the onions, he wondered irritably, the fields of El Salvador?

That is just *so* Cragen! : )

[mccoylover]

Thanks - if I continue it, I'll have to work something in where Don has cause to tell Jack he's being FREAKIN' annoying or some other freaking thing!